The Little Fairy's Qing Dynasty Transmigration

To be honest, the structure is quite huge and the subject matter is also very good. The problem is that the writing feels a bit messy. Some places are not connected and feel inexplicable. One second I am writing about this brother and the next second I am writing about another brother. The connection is inconsistent. Just when I am at the most exciting moment, I suddenly write something else. I feel dizzy after reading it.

Why do we need people from later generations to come and disturb us? Isn't what we want to do now to strengthen the country?

Lin Mu's existence feels like a waste of quotas. Okay, will the country allow these ten quotas to be allocated randomly? It's just ten. The anti-narcotics police themselves will forget about it and let a kid who knows nothing go through time?

Why am I so reluctant to buy this article? My mind is buzzing and my money is wasted by reading this article. Abandon the article, stop reading, stop reading, it's so boring!

The outline is good, but the writing is poor and there are problems with logic.

There are so many modern heroines who are not afraid of revealing their secrets. After all, they all know the heroine's background.

That's it. I'm still waiting for a long story. The beginning is so huge, I also know that the rest will be exciting

The heroine was still a little careless. She thought that Xiuxian had suppressed people like Prince Kangxi, so she felt that she had everything under control. She didn't want to think that where there are people, there are rivers and lakes. Besides, most people don't know why you are valued by Kangxi. There must be some random people who think bad things, why not let the system always Always monitor the people and things around you so that you can control the overall situation. You can also buy a body-protecting treasure in the system to automatically become the head of the household when in danger. Otherwise, like the heroine, even if she has become an immortal but has no experience, even if someone wants to assassinate her, she may not be able to react for a while. If she is injured, others should be suspicious.

Hmm... Please recognize the reality, cover your face, this time-traveling woman, really, do people owe her, helpless

There is a way of watching a good plot being written badly, but it was fine before. I don't know why the player's part was suddenly inserted. And after the insertion, the heroine's own role is even less, and many places are mentioned in one stroke. Why do I have to rely on my own brain to fill in the parts that the author did not write when reading the article? The author is responsible for the beginning, and I can imagine the rest, right? It's anticlimactic, as if I wanted to write this plot, and that plot, too. After writing this, I wrote that, but I didn't finish the last two.