The Mermaid Runs Aground

I have read them all. To be honest, writing about campus love and the ignorant emotions between boys and girls belongs to the author's comfort zone. It is difficult to describe it beyond the scope of campus. The author needs to settle down. Don't write it if you can't write it. The relationship between characters under social issues is very complicated, and she still can't handle it at the moment. First of all, it is okay for the parents of the Sheng family to raise their children in poverty, but it is too much. It does not meet the standards and models of educating children of a wealthy family. A wealthy family can not have much love and companionship, and can also be partial, but it is a bit too shameful to beat and scold them at every turn and ignore the real needs of the children indiscriminately. And he only does this to his biological son, he is very kind to his other two children, which is too contrary to human nature. The couple seemed to have been deprived of their lives when they met the male protagonist. Not only did they lose their deep love for each other, but they also lost the most basic respect and dignity. They even felt like they were happy after class enemies were eliminated. This is the first thing I don't understand. Secondly, the setting of the heroine's adoptive parents is also very confusing. It can be seen from the above that the couple has always raised the heroine very well, and has invested no less in material and spiritual resources. Otherwise, the heroine would not be so confident and generous, would not spend money to solve problems, would not dare to confront the teachers, would not be so dependent on them, and would not have such a strong sense of being ignored when the younger brother arrived. This shows that the previous love and dedication were truly invested with real money and true feelings. It's just that the balance tilts a bit after the arrival of the biological child. This also happens in ordinary families, but the adoptive parents will make compensatory actions later, which the biological parents may not be able to do. No matter how you look at it, this couple is not a bad person. But later on, the style of painting changed, and the adoptive parents, especially the adoptive father, were portrayed as villains who tended to follow the crowd. When the daughter was only in high school, she was forced to get her husband-in-law, as if all the previous efforts were to marry her into a good family and pave the way for her family to prosper. However, parents with this kind of mentality will develop their children to give and please, and instill and brainwash their children from an early age. It is impossible for the subtle heroine to have such a strong subjectivity. She may even be willing to give and give in when her brother arrives. Third, the hostess's adoptive parents should not have participated in the trafficking, but the crime of buying and selling abduction was only proposed in 2015 when the law was improved. The original exemption of the buyer was changed to the buyer's leniency and then the same crime. A few decades ago, the adoption mechanism was not perfect. There were too many infertile couples who adopted a child through formal means and gave some money. Some even adopted the child from the biological parents. Most of the buyers committed crimes unintentionally. The author's treatment of this part is very rough. There is a difference between whether it is a premeditated abduction and purchase of a person who has taken a fancy to it and the consciousness of committing a crime, or whether it is a person who saves a little life from a trafficker and fails to report it to the public security organs out of selfish motives, thus leading to a crime. There is a difference. If it's the former, these two rotten people can't raise such a heroine. If it is the latter, then the relationship between the heroine and her adoptive parents after being found by her biological parents is too rough. Whether it is the adoptive parents or the heroine, it is really not in line with human nature and the logic of the behavior to break off the relationship. I feel that in order to give the heroine a confident and proud character that the audience would love to see, she was written as a child who was raised by a wealthy family. However, in order to take advantage of social issues such as trafficking in the world and to maintain ZZ correctness, the adoptive parents were forced to be written as bad people who fear crime and run away from crime, and have no contact with the heroine until death. All I can say is that the author is either too young and has not yet understood the complexity of human nature and cannot control the description of relationships in these specific situations, or he is too lazy and treats readers as fools. Maybe some young children who are not deeply involved in the world will think that this is a manifestation of the characters' daring to love and hate... Many places are really too contradictory.

If the second half of the book can continue the level of the first half, not to mention becoming a hit, there shouldn't be a big problem in collecting 200,000 copies. The campus part is much better than most campus books on the market, and the setting is also attractive. It's a shame. I will still take a look at the author's campus articles in the future, hoping they won't be so bad again.

No matter how good your writing is in the front, your writing in the back will be as bad as it is. It's particularly ugly. I don't understand what you want to write in the back.

I'm really speechless [covering my face and laughing and crying]. It's been a few months since I read this book and I'm still so angry. If you could write a little bit about the feeling of divorce, the data in this book wouldn't be that bad. Obviously you can write it [Cracked]

If there's no more extras, just mark it as finished, okay? [Covering face, laughing and crying] How long has it been?

The ending was too rushed, and I felt like I still didn't have enough grasp of the subject matter, but the previous campus part was really gripping.

Why don't you come here and sigh that this article is such a pity?

I feel like the author is more comfortable writing about the campus section.

I will wait for you to finish this article [Qingxin], take your time and write what you want to write

Because I like the book about divorce, I started to like the author a lot, but I really don't understand why the heroine is infertile and the male protagonist is just that. The two little bitter gourds are already suffering, and they have to add insult to injury. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]