
The Immortal Lord's White Moonlight Has Returned
仙君心上白月光回来了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 79k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 2d ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
35Chapters
805Favorites
7.4Score
319Nutrient gifts
3.1kClicks per chapter
81Comments
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This book feels more like an outline
Thanks for the big discount!
I've finished watching it. It's pretty good except for being a little short.
"'" Is a big thorn in the side of the author~ land
It's pretty, but a little short
I feel like it's great to see Master Xianjun here.
I feel that the relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is a bit weird. At first, the female protagonist wanted to eat the male protagonist and liked her appearance. Later, she found out that Xianjun was popular and had been helping Xianjun. Suddenly, it felt strange. Doesn't that witch share the same body as Qingcheng? Why did they separate again later?
I don't know what to write, but it's pretty good. The plot is very smooth, the main line is always there, and there are also foreshadowings. But I think it emphasizes the main plot a bit too much. I have been writing about this princess being transferred from the time she appeared until now. Readers can also see that there is no need to keep emphasizing it. The male protagonist also felt from the beginning that there should be a little more firmness later on. I felt that he was still hesitating many times. Overall, the writing was a bit lengthy. Since the princess and the heroine are the same? Or is there any connection? Can we write some similar little actions or characters between them? Then the male protagonist will be impressed by this, which can also promote the development of the emotional line.
I like it so much(??ω?)? Hey
Long time no see, I changed my name! Looking forward to it! Come on! Come on!