Chongqing Apartment

The advantages and disadvantages are obvious Let's talk about the advantages first—— 1. The first 23 chapters are really well written, the four people are childhood sweethearts, and many plots are written to make people feel warm. 2. The historical and geographical research is really serious, and the reading is immersive. 3. The writing style of Granny Zombie is really impeccable, the writing style is very good and natural. Let's talk about the shortcomings—— 1. The character image collapsed Lang Hua's character is so bad that it doesn't make sense, and there is no gradual transformation. In the previous chapter, he was saying that Qing Man was like his own sister and it was impossible to betray her, but in the next chapter, he sent her to the boss's bed. In the previous chapter, he was still saying that Qiu Yi was his brother and it was impossible to separate Qiu Yi and Wen Yan. In the next chapter, he imprisoned Wen Yan and had a relationship with Wen Yan. Many comments in the comment area say that Lang Hua's character is very full, but I don't understand where the fullness lies. From the whole story, he is a character who is unsympathetic and unreasonably bad. Even until his death, no remorse was seen from him, and his death was hasty and inexplicable. Qing Man's image has not yet been established. In the early stage, she was portrayed as a noble and disciplined person. In the later stage, she was lost in material enjoyment and was willing to be the mistress of Qiu Yi's father. In the end, the relic left behind was Lang Hua's mother's garlic bracelet. It was difficult to understand what kind of feelings she had for Lang Hua, and she did not explain clearly. If she suffered a blow and went through hardships and finally embarked on the road of revolution like Lang Hua's mother and died before the founding of New China, then this character would still make people feel fuller and more tragic. The author would have been very hasty in arranging her to die of illness before the founding of New China. Wen Yan is really plump in the first half of the story, and she feels like a smart and independent female character. From the time she was imprisoned by Lang Hua and then seduced Lang Hua, Wen Yan's character also collapsed. After being imprisoned, she could go on a hunger strike or resist in other forms, but nothing happened. She immediately seduced after trying to escape once and failed. Luuring Langhua seems to give people the feeling that when a woman encounters a dilemma, she can't think of any other way except to lure the other person to sell her body. The character Wen Yan has also been de-intellectualized to a great extent. In order to write his own xp, the author has abandoned all the character personalities that he had spent time establishing before. It is really incomprehensible. If she had mistakenly thought that Qiu Yi had been sacrificed and seduced Lang Hua in order to escape, it would be understandable. However, it is obvious that she did not misunderstand the plot of Qiu Yi's sacrifice, so it is really incomprehensible. Qiu Yi is the only character who has not collapsed, but she has too few scenes and is a bit thin. 2. The plot is very fragmented With the Chongqing bombing as the background, the story about amnesia, imprisonment, and seduction is really fragmented. The heavy historical background combined with the bloody plot makes it difficult to finish the story. It is understandable why Lang Hua likes Wen Yan, but there is really no need for the author to emphasize that Wen Yan had never done anything with Qiu Yi when they lived together before. He knows that it is the author's inherent xp to match a rotten cucumber with a C girl, but there is really no need to emphasize that Wen Yan was still a C girl when she seduced Lang Hua. Such special emphasis is disgusting.

I read the whole article in one go, and I have to say that the author's writing style is really good, the descriptions are also very delicate, and the article is fascinating. When reading the subject matter of this type of article, I always think about the feelings of family and country, and the national justice. I didn't expect it to be a very relaxing article. I was really attracted by the sincere and touching relationship between Qiu Yi and Wen Yan. I really hope that they can have a conclusion. As a result, later I found out that the theme was changed to a bloody sadomasochism? Especially Xie Langhua and Wen, the characters are really a bit warm. I think the author wrote the character group portraits from various perspectives. The focus is on the sadomasochism of the four protagonists. It is clear that gentle autumn can contribute to their careers and contribute to the country, echoing emotions and national feelings, but In order to sublimate their love, because of the subject matter, background and era written by the author, to be honest, if it were written about the entangled relationship with Xie and amnesia, it is really unnecessary. I am really sorry for that period of history in the past. I know I will definitely be said by others. It doesn't matter. As a reader, I feel that there is nothing wrong with me when I express my true reading feelings. Maybe This is a way to create a character. Shouldn't the creation of a character be about using words to give him a soul? There may be some details that I haven't seen about this character, but I think the subject and object of the article are reversed. I don't understand the author's central intention and the theme she wants to express. The article is mixed with very confusing emotions, and the story line is also... Don't say too much??

It's really disgusting. The male lead should be replaced by Lang Hua, who takes up 90% of the page. I don't feel that he feels any guilt towards the second female lead. Disgusting. The plot is a mess. I really don't understand. If the heroine is locked up, then the heroine has to commit herself to the second male lead before she can get out? It really writes that no matter what difficulties women encounter, if they betray themselves, the problems will be solved. I really can't stand it anymore after watching it, and I don't want to see the second male lead having an epiphany and dying tragically, making other people sigh. Anyway, it's as disgusting as eating a fly.

How should I put it, I think many netizens have done a good job analyzing the roles of the four protagonists. The characters in Grandma Zombie are relatively vivid. Others have already mentioned their advantages, and I don't have anything special to add. The biggest feature of the stories of the Republic of China is that the more distant the plot is from real politics, the easier it is to play out. For example, the story of the second male lead is easier to write than the story of the first male lead and the second female lead. Secondly, the second man did not feel particularly sorry for the first woman before imprisoning her. The second male lead is sorry for the second female lead. The novel spends a large part of the novel detailing the relationship between a woman and a man and a woman. He repeatedly emphasizes to readers that if the man does anything to provoke a relationship between a woman and a woman, the woman will not forgive him. The three protagonists all know this very well, so the second male lead didn't dare to express his feelings in the early stage. The biggest dilemma in the relationship between the second male and female is not that the male's family is rich, but that the female first cannot steal his friend's sweetheart. Therefore, it makes no sense that the second male lead has to imprison the female first person after he has power and rely on captivity to make love, because the second male lead should know very well that if he wants to heal his broken relationship with the female first one, he must make up for the damage he has done to the second female lead. The other thing is my opinion on the logic of character behavior. I feel that after the second male lead uses the second female lead to gain a powerful position, he should no longer use the second female lead to engage in self-abuse based on his character. Because it makes no sense. There are gains and losses, and the second male lead knows it very well. The scene where the first female actor loses her memory feels like a benefit for the second male lead. This plot is superfluous to the development of several characters' personalities and the main logic of the story. You must write about the entanglement between the second male lead and the first female lead. It is better to write it from the perspective of social justice. Summary: The female protagonist is too violent and no one needs her. The first male is too perfect. The exciting plot is all about the male and female actors.

. . . . . . . Um, the female lead, the male lead, and the second female lead are so miserable.

I don't feel that autumn is weak. Judging from some of his methods, he is kind of smart but a little crazy. With intellectual persistence and cunning. They were separated and struggled alone for a long time, but as their personalities grew, they still connected with each other when they met again.

The author has quite a lot of ideas. Nowadays, instead of writing about industrial saccharine, it is rare to write according to one's own preferences. However, I don't understand the author's preference for Xie Langhua. He is a character with no charm, who is simply bad and has no bottom line. He is not even as good as Liang Fusheng.

It starts with the female protagonist being picked up by the male lead after the air raid. Before that, I really felt that the writing was very good, because it is true and consistent with the character. Only in this way can readers believe that from now on, it is necessary to transform into a child with amnesia, be imprisoned, and seduced. It is really redundant. From this point on, the heroine and the male protagonist have collapsed, and then wouldn't it be good to write the female protagonist according to the idea of ​​the female protagonist leading her to become a strong self again? I don't think the second female lead doesn't have the ability to break herself and recast herself. Both female characters themselves are very shining. Then he messed up and ruined the second female lead. The only thing that didn't fall apart was the male protagonist, but the relationship or plot line between him and the female protagonist could have been more exciting. Damn, maybe the author is in a hurry to finish. I can only say that before the node, I will give it five stars. After the node, this kind of abuse for the sake of abuse, especially the miserable women must be forcibly created, no more 2 stars.

This novel was probably written by the author to satisfy his own xp. The male protagonist is a tool and a successor to the villain, and the second male protagonist is the real male protagonist.

Xie Langhua's stubbornness made me feel uncomfortable. Maybe he really wanted to be a good person, or maybe he was too cunning. Before he died, he had to find a way to make his childhood playmate remember him forever.