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Bird-brained troublemaker top x aloof immortal-respected-parent bottom
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Zhong Xiang thought that attaining immortality meant enduring heavenly punishment forever.
Luo Hanzhi: I'm your punishment.
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Once upon a time, there was a mountain, and an immortal lived on it. The immortal kept a bird.
The bird was just an ordinary little white sparrow, frozen stiff in the snow and on the verge of dying. Zhong Xiang picked him up, fed him some immortal dew, and brought him back to life.
The next day, facing the snow that had broken loose from the mountaintop, Zhong Xiang looked at the tiny sparrow in his hand, no bigger than his fist, then looked at the immortal dew. He was utterly baffled.
How could such a tiny bird have such a loud voice?
Other Immortal Venerables raised phoenixes. When a phoenix sang, all the birds came to pay their respects. The little white sparrow hopped around beside the phoenix, not even as tall as one of its toes. But when it opened its beak, its voice shook the universe and went on for seven days straight, driving the phoenix away in a rage.
The phoenix went straight to complain to the Immortal Venerable.
Hidden in Zhong Xiang's sleeve, the little white sparrow heard him say, "He's just an ordinary bird."
The phoenix had never been so speechless in its life.
How long could an ordinary bird live? Even if he caused trouble, he couldn't tear the heavens apart.
Until one day, that tiny sparrow really did tear the heavens apart.
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○ Low-magic worldbuilding, all made up
○ Younger top, happy ending
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After more than thirty years as childhood friends, Guan Su felt he had never truly understood Cheng Zhuofu.
In the black cell, someone spat in his face. The once-proud young gentleman didn't even look angry. He slowly wiped it away with his sleeve and only asked, "You devoted half your life to scholarship. Was this the ending you wanted, with your family destroyed?"
Guan Su lifted his head and glared at him, retorting, "Better than being a stray dog, wagging your tail and begging at the doors of the powerful!"
Guan Su eventually got out of the cell. Nanjing's winter was cold and damp. The sunlight was so bright it hurt to look at, yet offered no warmth at all.
He told the person waiting outside that he still missed the sunshine in Beijing.
Cheng Zhuofu draped his own overcoat around Guan Su's shoulders. His dry, warm hand covered Guan Su's and held it firmly.
"It's Beiping now," he replied softly.
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They had already parted ways three times in the first half of their lives. Guan Su thought he should have gotten used to it by now.
Even if these stars are no longer those of last night, he would still... stand in the wind and dew for you until the middle of the night.
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Worldly, charming, fallen scion top x proud, aloof intellectual bottom
* A Republican-era childhood-friends story, from the 1910s to the 1940s
* A turbulent era, a life of wandering, reunions and separations, open ending
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Theme: Nothing can stop you from yearning for freedom.
The process of pursuing this mountain was not comfortable, because I don't read much about cultivating immortals. In my mind, this mountain was the first one. When Zhongyun said that tens of millions of people are not as good as Jiuluo, my eyes were sore, just like when Jiuluo hit the Fuyan platform with his body and insisted on going his own way, even the immortals, devils and gods were not as good as Zhongyun. The last time the soul was raised, it took two hundred years to get Luo Hanzhi. This time, maybe it was faster because it had blood, bones, and soul. In 76 years, Zhong Yun didn't have to wait too long. Of course there are things that are difficult to calm down. The deaths of Gusi and Xiaolan made my eyes and nose wrinkle together. Gusi failed to find her husband, but she died with him. I wish Shu Yun didn't love Gusi, but he did, and it made me feel even more uncomfortable when he loved her. You bastard, why do you love her? Let's talk about Xiao Lan and Xi Lianchuan. I really want to give Xi Lianchuan a big competition. Dasha Que also feels that Xiao Lan doesn't deserve it. There is no such wind in the world anymore. My literary attainments are really not high and I don't know what to say. Just, congratulations on the completion of this mountain! Looking forward to the extra chapter ~ See you in the next one.
In fact, when I was reading the article, I also felt what the author said was "too light." From the first chapter to the last chapter, I felt as if I had walked with the author through a long, confused, overwhelmed, and constantly revised road. Maybe this road is not perfect, but the touches it brings to me, and some of the associations and thoughts it triggers are real. It was so real that at the end, in the light and shadow, I saw everyone in the book waving to me, and I said goodbye to them with a smile. Just like any ordinary mortal, in the short and long life afterwards, he happily said, "I have seen guests from heaven." Really appreciate the author's words!
Come in every now and then to see if the revision is complete & if there are any extras
"The Soul of Loris in the Netherland"
I really like the setting that Jiuluo is just an ordinary bird! He is just an ordinary bird, not a phoenix or a red bird. He will not suddenly have great powers and solve everything easily. He did everything he could for Zhong Liang. He is just an ordinary little bird, but he is also the only one in the sky and on earth. He is Zhongliang's little bird. There is only one Zhongliang in his heart. How wonderful!
Emma, who practices cultivation to become a part of you? And you are picky and picky, and you are not willing to take it. You have to go to the human world first and make a lot of troubles.
It's Qingming Festival. Come and offer incense to my aunt
It's over. Woohoo. I want to watch the extras.
This bird is clattering up the tree again, it's great~
Fresh Zhongzi for the Dragon Boat Festival! (Running around telling each other. Jpg)