[This novel will be completed with a V update starting from Chapter 28 on September 24. If you've already read it, please don't buy it again~~ Thank you for all your support and company. Please keep supporting me in the future too~~]
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- My upcoming novel, "Shanhai Matchmaking Agency," is also in my profile. Please add it to your reading lists~
Blurb:
After Ye Lin is hit by a truck, a System appears.
System: You start with one pet, and can earn up to 9,999 points a day.
Ye Lin: Stop advertising. Say something normal.
System: Missions: earn the target's affection, successfully transform into human form, and ask your owner for a kiss.
Ye Lin: ???
System: Host, do your best, dear!
Ye Lin: …
Mini-scene
A certain gong: The little guy is so cute in human form. I want to kiss him! But I'm afraid I'll scare him...
Ye Lin: Come on! Kiss me! Stop dawdling! Are you impotent or what?!
A note from the author:
1. This is a quick transmigration story. The small worlds have been forcibly given happy endings in the bonus chapters (evil grin).
2. There is a couple, so don't panic. The ending will definitely be a perfect happy ending too, so don't panic!
3. Please be nice to each other while reading, little angels~ Kisses~
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My upcoming novel, "Shanhai Matchmaking Agency," is in my author profile. Please add it to your reading lists, little angels~
Here's the blurb:
Yan Huai is a Bai Ze.
After reform and opening up, demons are no longer allowed to cultivate into human form, so everyone goes with the flow and starts integrating into human society.
By now, the demons are used to their human identities, and most of them have pretty good lives.
There is just one problem: finding a partner is hard.
Because of their different lifestyles, demons' rates of singlehood keep climbing year after year.
Yan Huai sees an opportunity:
"I'm going to open a matchmaking agency."
The agency opens successfully, but the clients' demands are quite unusual.
Bian asks, pushing up his gold-rimmed glasses: "Ideally, a lawyer or judge who can work with me to uphold justice."
Yan Huai: "Sure."
Taotie feels his abs. "I want someone who takes care of the home. I don't care about anything else, as long as they can cook, and it doesn't have to be much, just seven or eight meals a day."
Yan Huai: "I'll see what I can do."
Kunpeng arrives with a travel pack, looking dusty from the road. "I love traveling, and want a partner who can go around the world with me. Oh, and they'd have to fly through the sky and dive into the sea."
Yan Huai: "I'll... do my best."
Pixiu wears the same old jacket he's had for five years. "I have just two requirements. First, they have to earn a lot. Second, they can't spend money."
Yan Huai: "…"
After a long stretch of hard work, the little Bai Ze boss finally gets good news that a client has found a partner and is invited to celebrate at a bar.
He gets drunk.
When he wakes up, his friend looks at him with a complicated expression. "Do you remember what you did last night?"
Yan Huai: "What did I do?"
"You insisted on making a handsome guy stand on the bar and sing The Smurfs. You wouldn't let go, and even claimed you'd prove that the Smurfs are actually yellow-skinned."
Yan Huai: "…"
Yan Huai says calmly, "Really? I don't believe it."
So his friend opens a video on his phone for him to watch.
Yan Huai sees the stunningly handsome guy onscreen, his face pitch-black with rage, and wishes he could dig out a secluded mansion in Kunlun with his own feet, hide in the mountains, and never see another person again.
But he can't dig out a mansion, and he doesn't have the money to go live in seclusion in the Kunlun Mountains. So he has no choice but to go back to work at the matchmaking agency.
Fortunately, business is good today. A client arrives first thing in the morning.
The handsome man is tall and long-legged, with an imposing presence. Even in a simple white T-shirt, his air of authority is unmistakable. He looks a little like a domineering king.
Yan Huai thinks the man looks oddly familiar.
Yazi raises an eyebrow and smiles. "I'm stubborn. I only want to find the little Bai Ze who dragged me into singing The Smurfs at the bar the other night as my partner. I wonder if the boss here has any leads, hm?"
Yan Huai: "…"
Yan Huai: I don't think I do.
Theme: Humans and animals living together in harmony
I also feel a bit regretful. I feel like the extra story has no memory because of Xiao Shou. They are the same person, but they don't look like the same person.
To be honest, I always have a sense of being cheated on, and I always feel that this little miracle doctor is not being accepted QAQ
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Then you are so awesome (hypocritical applause jpg,) Hahahahahaha
By the way, after reading the whole text, the story is very good, but I found some small problems that do not affect the reading. I would like to give some small, immature suggestions to you. I hope I won't offend you and can develop better: 1. Use exclamation marks with caution. I found that I like to use exclamation marks in some small places where the tone is not so strong (most of the exclamation marks are correct). Although it does not affect reading, sometimes readers will feel other meanings when reading. I can't remember the exact location, but I seem to be able to vaguely remember a little bit. The most inconsistent part is that there seems to be a world that emphasizes how powerful the attack is and how many achievements it has achieved! When I read that, even though I knew that adding big exclamation points was to emphasize the strong emphasis, I still felt like I was dumbfounded. Of course, this is just my personal opinion, and it may not be the same for all readers. You can carefully appreciate the context of adding exclamation points. After all, in Chinese, exclamation points are a very serious punctuation mark to express emphasis. So I hope you can use exclamation marks correctly and use them according to the context, but don't deny your exclamation marks, because most of the time, big exclamation marks are used well, but there are just too many exclamation marks. 2. The issue of the location of the extra chapter, because every time a subject leaves the world in DaDa, it makes people feel sad and sad, and there will be some regrets. This shows that DaDa's writing style is good and can resonate with some readers. However, because the sweet stories are clearly marked, and there are some purely sweet stories, impatient readers may run away in tears after seeing such a regrettable "end" (fake), and not be able to see the sweet extras. So you can consider adding extra chapters after each world. Of course, the current layout is correct. According to the development of the plot, it is relatively smooth. I will consider this opinion as appropriate, because there are many authors who like to put the extra chapters of all worlds at the end. There are also many authors who label the story as sweet but the content is not so sweet. When it is abused, it will make readers cry to death. There are also readers who like the ending like this and think that it is very satisfying now ~ I will consider it as appropriate. After all, it is difficult to agree with everyone and everyone has different tastes, so everyone's evaluation is different. Just follow the format you like. I personally like it very much! For other suggestions, you can ask other authors or editors for their opinions. I am not a professional, so I won't mess with it~ Damn, I am Dandan. I changed my name because I found that my original name was ambiguous. . . . My 2 points have been sent out, and I can only make up for the 0 points. Don't misunderstand that I don't like Wenwen QAQ. . . Don't post a comment to reply, post it to a normal comment and see if you can make a long comment. Finally, I wish you the best to be able to sign a contract for the next book, more people will read it, and you will earn a lot of small money! I wonder if these are enough for 1,000 words? Forget it, add another word, blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah~ Oh, I don't know if a non-2-point long review can be considered a long review. I was too impulsive and careless. How could I post the comment first? Come on! Finished spreading flowers~
Wow, the treasure is huge~very beautiful~ヾ(^▽^*)))
See you next time~Spread the flowers and spread the flowers
Claw, it's so sweet hehehehehehehe it's great
Wow, it's almost finished, congratulations!
Hahahahahahahahaha
Ah ah ah ah, give me a dozen of these mother-in-laws!