I Married the General by Contract

It's okay, big brother, I really want to see the pre-released Mary Sue attack

After reading it, well, the character design in the early stage was quite attractive to me, but later on the pace was so fast that it didn't feel smooth in many places. In addition, the amount of information in the later period was so huge that I didn't have time to react and I didn't know where many things came from. The whole article felt like watching a movie commentary at double speed, and even the commentary was unclear. It doesn't mean that I am a novice when reading the wife's column. Maybe I just don't want to write properly anymore and just copy the outline. In addition, many new characters appeared in the later period, including the character relationships and various plots, which were very confusing. It gave me the same sticky feeling that made me take a sip of cooking oil and couldn't swallow it. This article did not make me feel that my wife was writing it seriously, or it may be that my level is limited, or she may have encountered other problems, but in short, I hope that my wife will continue to work hard.

Uh, this doll... I couldn't help it anymore and wanted to say something (collapsed and covered my face) why there was a doll showing up when they went to bed! ! !

Hey hey hey, looking forward to the author decrypting it

The front is okay, but the back is a bit sloppy and "childish"

I didn't expect there would be a scene involving the third master next door and Xiao Qi, haha

When will the pre-payment be opened? QAQ

I've finished watching it and want to see the follow-up of the trip (??ω?`)

When I saw the rabbit and wolf in front of me, I guessed whether it was Joe Rabbit and the others, and it turned out to be (=°ω°)?

Yes, it's my favorite cute baby