Former Rivals, Now Trading Flirtatious Glances

Finally, I saw a book that didn't have the stench of the obscene scenes of peeking in the shower, accidentally eating sex, and having my breasts touched. Apart from the author's beloved toe gripping, great writing

Finished spreading flowers! ! [Throw flowers][Throw flowers][Like][Like] What a delicious "love rival turned lover" article. After reading the text, I realized that the author had made such a big plot dumpling just for the sake of emotional jealousy. Therefore, I was very amazed at the author's ability to build a world view and weave a plot. Taoism, demon sect, monster clan, and royal family, everyone has their own purpose and destiny. The causes and effects of the past and present are intertwined. As the plot develops, the details are gradually revealed. It is really enjoyable to watch it in one sitting. My favorite dungeons are Taize Royal Rebellion and Immortal Sect Ceremony. All forces are secretly surging, and the protagonist is strategizing and fishing in troubled waters. It is very exciting [Sunglasses]. As for the protagonists specifically, I like both protagonists very much. Liu Yuechan is the kind of cool and self-sustained character that I like very much. The light of the sect is affectionate and interesting. Sister Wenwen 1 [milk tea] (well, actually we don't know if it is 1, but she does exude a powerful and tolerant offensive energy). Her cold demeanor is not a hard concave, but a combination of her focus, pride and vigilance for a new life. But at the same time, when facing Hong Yingjiao, she will be embarrassed by her "self-involved sentimentality". When flirting, she will drive the paper crane to stay on the bridge of other people's noses, and use her handkerchief to catch puppies, which is fascinating [spreading her hands]. Hong Yingjiao has a playful and childlike quality that is not often seen in Jin Dynasty but is difficult to write. Although she always talks big words, plays tricks and acts recklessly, she is not annoying and is more intelligent [rainbow fart]. I think it is because her background is also responsible and righteous. Although she is a bit blunt in terms of emotions, she also has many moments when she is impulsive for love, just like her little doughy and black hawk, which makes people watch and love her. I like the Shangsi Festival Lantern Festival the most about the emotional line. Everything is at night, under the moonlight, the darkness and light are intertwined, and the shadows are intertwined, especially the upper part. Let's talk about the writing style, my god, I don't know how many ancient books the author has eaten to be able to write such a book that has an ancient charm, is smooth, and retains a lively space, making people want to praise its elegance. Usually when I read novels, I get annoyed or simply skip the description of appearance, but in this novel, every time the author writes about the appearance and temperament of Liu Yuechan/Hong Yingjiao, they have a unique demeanor and are very handsome, which made me read carefully and drool [Cat Head]. And the names of other sects, magic weapons, big monsters, etc. Are also not surprising. In terms of plot, both literary drama and martial arts show off their skills. All in all, I really appreciate the writing style and it's trustworthy! (The only drawback is that the author has many typos, and I hope they will be fixed.) In fact, when I first read this article, I was particularly annoyed by the scenes of Xiao Zhantian and other supporting actors, but the interaction between the protagonists kept pulling me to read further. Later on, I was able to stick to the protagonist regardless of any male cannon fodder. And in fact, after reading it and thinking about it, I can find that 90% of the prominent important characters are women. Apart from the protagonist, the female characters who have some writing are also quite likable. Senior Sister Qingxuan, who is careful but likes to pretend to be confused, Helenu, the domineering saint whose sister is the best in the world, and Hassan who always looks at the prodigal saint. Most of the male characters are low-life villains or buffoons, so I think the author's handling of it is not bad. I feel a little pity [poor] when I see that the author has closed the book. In fact, I am still looking forward to the author's follow-up works. Just make a wish here! But I still thank the author for bringing such a good work, and wish the teacher all the best in his life! ! [Rose][Rose]

What I admire the most about the author is that the timeline of the article is very long, and the actual writing time is also very long. It seems that he also experienced a lot of twists and turns and pain in the middle. I wanted to give up the article at one point, but he did not finish the article in a hurry and have everyone die together or make dumplings for everyone. Instead, he insisted on finishing the timeline bit by bit. This kind of perseverance is very valuable. If you have this kind of perseverance and determination, everything will go smoothly [Come on]

Congratulations on the completion! ! Thank you, teacher, for persevering and giving Yuechan and Xiaohong a happy ending. I think this is the pinnacle of love rival writing. In fact, Yuechan and Xiaohong, as well as many female characters in the book, touched me. The teacher wrote it really well. I felt a little empty when I saw the cover letter, but I still wish the teacher a happy life! Think of it as making a wish, hoping to see the teacher come back and write a story again.

Thanks to Popo for writing this book. It suddenly became my favorite book. I am grateful to have met [lop-eared rabbit head] [lop-eared rabbit head]

Very beautiful, I really like the setting! It's a pity that I came across this article a little late. The author has already closed it down. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh no support. But I still want to thank the author for this good story! Just wish the author peace and joy in life and everything goes well [Good Luck Lotus]

Finished spreading flowers! ! ! ! ! This article is great, and the writing style is really good. This is the first article I have read that can draw more than 200 addresses and nearly 900,000 words. Normally I would be impatient after watching half of the plot and they would give up if they were not together. This one is completely different and the writing is great! It's really a pity that the author has closed the book. I hope I can come back to it if I have inspiration in the future [please][please][please][please][please][please][please][please]!

Author, you wrote really well. Thank you for persisting in finishing it.

I like it so much, the plot is good, and the author is very literate. I just learned today that the name of the monster also has a origin.

Thanks to the author for not giving up on this article