
Once, We Were So Close
曾经那么近
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 176k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 16y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
62Chapters
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I read this article in one day and one night. Like it very much! I first read "Concubine" on the forum before reading Sister Baidu's article. At first glance, I couldn't put it down. I really like this kind of clear water story. It's a little bit cruel, but mostly it's relaxing. My eyes blurred when I saw what Du Zihang and Guo Xiaoyu said when they said goodbye to each other for the first time, "Don't get sick, otherwise I will think you want to see me..." And Tagore's "If That's Your Will"... Yes, as everyone said, everyone can predict this ending from the beginning, but I still like this ending. Lovers will eventually get married. Life is either dull or helpless, so let us make it perfect in the article. Moreover, I think the ending is only one aspect, and it is a pleasure to watch the development of the storyline. I suggest that my sister change the name when she publishes the book, because this name will make people think that it is a sadistic story, the kind of story about fate and destiny. Looking forward to new stories...
I don't know why, I don't know why, but I just want to be with her, chat with her, eat with her, walk with her, and watch her smile because of him...
It turns out that the most important thing is not preserved in form, but in the heart...
He has done something wrong, but he will not continue to make mistakes. No matter what the consequences are, he will bear them.
She likes reading, so I go to the library every day. She likes broadcasting, so I arrange for her to go to the radio station. When she comes back late from tutoring, I pick her up, rain or shine. What's even more ridiculous is that she likes to listen to "Red River Valley", so I secretly learned to play the harmonica.
If that is your wish, I will stop singing immediately. If my eyes make your heart beat, I will remove my gaze from your face. If my presence alarms you, I will take another path. If I interfere with your wreath weaving, I will not come to this peaceful garden. If the oar stirs up waves, let my boat leave your shore
Finally I understand why it is called this name. "Looking back now, that was the only time he called me "Xiaoyu", with such an emotional tone, what he wanted to call me more was "Xiaoyu", right?!" I thought the same way at the time, hehehe
When I was reading the article today, I found that it was already the early morning of May 1st when my sister updated the article. Although I missed my sister's promise to us that the article would be completed before May, I actually didn't feel guilty at all. On the contrary, I was very touched and touched that my sister kept her promise (I glanced at the update time of Jinjiang earlier, and it was already 2 o'clock in the morning...). After all, my sister is already a wife and mother, and she also has to work. Under such circumstances, she still thinks about updating articles, which really touches us~~ Therefore, we can only write a long review for my sister. This is probably the only thing we can do as readers~ The reason why I put it here in Jinjiang is because Sina's comments are restricted╮(╯▽╰)╭ I started reading my sister's articles from the time of "Soldier Assault"~ I happened to see the recommendation of this fanfic of "Yuan Lang VS Nurse" when I was on a forum, so I accidentally stumbled on it and set up camp from then on. (Although, I have been diving for many years ~ I fly by myself) If I have to talk about the style of my sister's writing, it should be classified as Qingshui writing. It's the kind of light, non-entangled character relationship, and there will be no plots of physical and mental abuse. However, sometimes, this kind of writing that is as light as water makes people care the most, miss the most, and cannot let go. As far as "Once So Close" is concerned, all of us have seen the beginning and guessed the ending. In fact, this challenges the author's skills, but I have to admit that my sister's idea is ingenious. I think many people would have thought that Xiaoyu and Shao Lei would be a couple, and then a certain Zihang student would beat his chest and say balabala. However, my sister reached the same goal by different paths and created a style of her own. First we get Shao Lei away, and then the relationship between Xiao Yu and Zi Hang is slowly simmered, occasionally adding a little oil and vinegar. However, the relationship between Zi Hang and Pei Xinyu makes us entangled between Shao Lei and Zi Hang (although the sister herself has been entangled a lot before), and the final climax is the end, and the point is over. However, I think that I wrote that ending probably because my sister couldn't control herself in the end. Because, the end of the article is actually a bit inconsistent with the title of "Once So Close". Who was so close to whom, and then turned around sadly~ Is it Zihang and Pei Xinyu? Are they Shao Lei and Xiao Yu? Perhaps, by the end of the writing, each character has its own vitality, which is beyond our control. My sister's writing also has a second characteristic, that is, it keeps pace with the times. The words "Don't be obsessed with me, he's just a legend" and the abbreviation "ICBC" that appear in the article, as well as the recent announcement by the State Administration of Radio, Film and Television banning the use of abbreviations, all make this article lively. After all, this is a symphony of youth, young and full of vitality. It makes us feel that Xiaoyu, Zihang, Shao Lei, etc. Are all people around us, which makes the characters more full. So, sister, you are really awesome~~ Well, the story that was once so close will finally come to an end. There are rumors that my sister is going to write "Feng Ge"~~ Here, I want to say to all the readers who are lucky enough to be here, before reading "Feng Ge", go read "Concubine", they are sisters~! I wish my sister and all Jinjiang readers who are lucky enough to be here a happy holiday~! Oh, by the way, allow me to ask my sister for a little leave~~ Because I have to be a volunteer for the World Expo, so I may not be able to follow up on "Feng Ge" in time~ Well, but I will definitely come back~! Kimiblue May 1, 2010
Thank you Yanyu! This is the last chapter, and I feel like I still haven't finished it. I really like your writing. Let's start a new chapter. Definitely support it to the end.
It's such a pity that it's coming to an end. I'm a little bit sad to leave it. Thank you Yanyu for giving us such wonderful and warm articles. I look forward to more of your works.