HP: The Witch Lily Mead

Out of 100, I would give this book a score of 75~ The setting is quite interesting. The author will tell you openly that the heroine has red hair and green eyes, which has led to intersections and stories with many people. I feel that the author is still very good at writing about the love between men and women, very delicately ~ the small movements and expressions of the characters are very vivid, for example, Draco's journey of falling in love with the Muggle heroine is also written very clearly and interestingly! But if you are too good at writing, sometimes it is easy to misunderstand the setting. For example, the heroine cannot feel the feelings for the hero, so they are together inexplicably. For example, some of Harry's reactions and actions towards the heroine are very similar to a crush, but the author also said it is friendship, which makes people feel that this friendship is too possessive. For example, in the fifth grade, Blaise suddenly became interested in the heroine, and there was no foreshadowing before, which was very abrupt. Also, it can be seen that the plot and logic settings are not very smooth, and sometimes it feels like a certain plot of the original work has been copied; there are even typos, such as writing Harry's Seeker instead of Chaser... Generally speaking, it can only be watched based on the emotional lines (family, love and friendship), especially when the perspective of the male protagonist is switched later, it really brings out the arrogant and awkward character of Brother Yan! But if you originally pay more attention to logic, plot and rationality, you may not like it very much!

What kind of faint but persistent pain and sadness is really teaching. He will never forget Lily, their past, every time Lily turns around, her hair

The professor in the article makes me want to cry QAQ

This article is great! The author's writing style is very clear and logical. I haven't read a HP fanfic in a long time!

After watching it in one go, it was the heroine and Snape who couldn't help but feel disappointed.

This article is really well written, and everyone writes so vividly. The ending of Snape's extravaganza is really sad and satisfying. Thanks to my wife for producing such a good article. This article is really a legacy in the HP world.

I also want to see the professor. This is definitely my favorite professor. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good

Although the male protagonist is Draco, I still shed tears for the professor

This is a very favorite article. It combines romance and plot. The characterization of the characters is very close to the original work. There is no bloody stand-in plot or exaggerated golden fingers. The whole story is slowly told in a peaceful and smooth writing style. It is very comfortable and smooth to read. I am not educated and can't say anything else except to praise it! Every time I see a post asking for an article, I recommend this book! Come on! Rush!

It's so well written, this extra chapter is a stroke of genius. Yes, how could the professor forget Lily? Although all the worries related to Lily have come to an end, even though everything is over, whether you love or hate it, it is the trace left by Lily after all. It has become a part of the professor together with the memory over the years. Lily is almost all his past and present. Forgetting Lily is like forgetting yourself. How can people forget themselves?