Yize is the youngest of the Dream Gods. She had planned to sit around and wait to die like the rest of her clan, living like a good-for-nothing, but somehow she was pushed to her feet instead~
To save her mother, Yize accepts a command from the Heavenly God. She leaps into the reincarnation passage, destroys her immortal body, and falls into the mortal world.
In this life, she is destined to fight for the mission of the divine race, with no distractions.
And yet, some presumptuous mortal keeps trying to protect her...
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Yize rejects him again and again, because her goal in this life is to marry an emperor, while he... is the emperor's son...
One small step apart, yet worlds between them.
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Perhaps that fool was simply too persistent. Perhaps the God of Fate had a stroke of genius that left her nowhere to hide.
At last, Yize falls into the mundane weave of fate, and from then on her destiny becomes completely entangled with that of the mortal Yongqi.
Her goal changes from marrying an emperor to... raising a prince to become one...
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The royal family's infighting never stops for even a moment. Yize toils in the mortal world for the sake of the divine race's mission. Just as she is congratulating herself on achieving some success, she turns around and discovers that her beloved husband... has already fallen for someone else?
I hear you have another love, so I'll tear it apart and burn it.
But she doesn't know that from the moment they arrived in the mortal world, they were destined to be trapped by the curse of these eight words: "Fear breeds suspicion; suspicion breeds change."
Behind the peaceful and prosperous age, the divine and demon races are locked in a contest, setting off a bloody battle in the mortal world...
Theme: In this world, everything besides life and death is a small matter. As long as life goes on, so does the struggle!
Honestly, all the novels on JJ (a Chinese online literature platform) give me the same feeling: I'd give up after reading just a few chapters. The only novel I forced myself to finish was *Painful Faith*, which is supposedly very popular in China. After reading it, I couldn't understand how bullies could fall in love with each other. Stockholm syndrome isn't contagious, is it? And what about school bullies? No matter how powerful their connections are, they can't just pay off someone's hospital bills. Do they think the police are just sitting around doing nothing? Then, while browsing Zhihu, I stumbled upon your question and came across it, so I clicked through and quickly read your novel. The writing is good, the flow is smooth, but it's clear you lack social experience. However, I have to give your work a very high score; your imagination is excellent, and your perseverance is truly admirable. On JJ, you're a breath of fresh air—you don't follow commercial models, you just write the novels you love. This is the kind of literary perspective most needed in today's materialistic and money-driven society. Truth is often held by a minority, which is why writers before they become famous are often very lonely. Learn to enjoy solitude, work for your passion, and one day you will succeed. Finally, I want to give you a huge encouragement. I've published novels, but when I put them on JJ for free, they were incredibly unpopular, with only a handful of favorites. You're doing much better than me, aren't you? ^_^ Don't be discouraged, keep going, let's encourage each other!
I came from Zhihu. The author's writing is alright; it's not as bad as some people say. Keep it up! I really admire how much you've written. I myself would give up after writing a few tens of thousands of words in a novel. I admire the author's perseverance.
Hello, ma'am. I came from Zhihu. Due to time constraints, I only skimmed through the article. I also have a dream of creating content, and I admire your perseverance. I'd like to share some of my own simple understanding, hoping it can be helpful to you. Your story boasts a vast and well-developed world, but you haven't managed to tell it in a smooth and engaging way. As a reader, when I read the first chapter, I felt overwhelmed by the sheer volume of information; the new characters and settings were too densely packed into one chapter. While this was immediately apparent to you as the creator, readers needed patience to fully grasp it. And in today's online environment, many people lack patience. You could reduce the number of characters appearing in the first few chapters and focus more on developing the main character in detail. This would give readers a general idea of the kind of story you're trying to tell. I also took a look at your new book, which is much better than this one. However, your content lacks rhythm. For novels set in non-modern times, the depiction of space and environment is essential; both detailed and plain descriptions are indispensable. Some humble opinions (sorry, sorry).
Your writing style is actually a bit like Shuqi Novels... Baidu works too. Have you seen this platform? It's the one with the initial shock value that really grabs you in. Jinjiang is getting a bit too commercial now. Since you haven't signed a contract, why not try posting on other platforms? There's no need to put all your eggs in one basket.
Haha, I'm also from Zhihu, but I'm not here to say anything bad~ First, I opened the prologue. Hmm? What is this? Why are there so many words? Just scroll down. Huh? A duel? What does that mean? Ugh, I don't want to watch anymore. I exited and checked the view count. Hmm? There are still three chapters from the previous version? Hmm, let me click in and take a look. I'm going to see Yinzhen? What's the story behind it? I'm a little curious. Wow, children killing their father? Hmm, that's interesting. Haha, this is my thought process while reading your work. I also checked out the first chapter of the current version later, but I didn't finish reading either version. Just between you and me, I think the original version is better because it has a very intense conflict at the beginning. However, I find it unreasonable that Consort Xi gave up on saving Emperor Yongzheng. After all, in the common folk, the emperor was omnipotent, and concubines would be more likely to believe that the emperor, whom they saw every day, could decide their life and death, rather than believing in some ethereal god. The author writes on relatively niche themes, which are usually only dared by established authors with a large readership. For example, Shui Qiancheng started writing "Cambrian Rebirth" after finishing "188 Boy Band". Having a fanbase makes it easier to believe that the author can produce good work. The author's writing is decent, but the storytelling is a bit too serious. People come to Jinjiang to read web novels, and what are the characteristics of web novels? Definitely not like this! If you want more people to see your writing and understand your story, you either need to follow the trend and attract a group of loyal fans before continuing to write, or you need to change your writing style to a platform that better suits you. There's no other way. Finally, here's a small suggestion: be sure to break your text into smaller paragraphs and use more short sentences. Everyone reads on their phones. If you open your own text on your phone, you'll see a huge, densely packed area of text.
If you're considering signing a contract, I feel you could try a more mainstream style. The Qing Dynasty palace drama and fantasy are really incompatible; combining them is as odd as strawberry mapo tofu. Qing Dynasty palace dramas are usually about palace intrigue. However, you're very talented, and this idea is brilliant. Writing novels is all about constantly experimenting. Keep it up, author! Your writing is still quite good.
I came from Zhihu, and it wasn't that good either. I read a little bit, and it was alright. It wasn't terrible. The reason it wasn't approved might be because the first three chapters didn't quite meet the "golden three chapters" rule, plus the genre wasn't quite what's currently popular. But it's really impressive that you've written so much. I know you also write, so seeing you've written so much is really wonderful! Actually, I think you could try writing male-oriented fiction; you'd be great! Keep it up!
Sister, I'm not trying to be mean, but if you want to improve, go scan the charts first, take notes on each one, see how the plot unfolds, how much information is packed into the first three chapters, how many hooks are planted. Don't just bury your head in your work and keep hitting a wall. You've written over a million words and still ended up using language to drive the plot...
I stumbled upon this on Zhihu, which felt like fate. Just as the author said, it's not the typical formulaic story found on Jinjiang Literature City's bestseller lists. It's worth reading; at least the female lead isn't overly pretentious, which is rare on Jinjiang. Keep it up!
This company is so heartless! They won't even give a chance to someone who works exceptionally hard! They've signed so many people who just quit after signing, yet they won't even give someone with such perseverance a chance. It's truly disheartening.