People will die if they are killed. What is it if they are not inferior in skills?? As expected of you, Uchiha Sasuke!!
And can there be more scenes like throwing dice?
I'm so happy. It's been a long time since I've read an article and not felt sad but still very happy.
Rolling dice is so delicious!!! Ahhhh, I really want to watch more extras!!!!
In fact, I think Da Da's writing style is very good, and he should be able to write a gentle emotional flow very well. However, the narrative habits may be adjusted again. Except for some excessive flashbacks, in some sentences-especially those using two dashes, if the writing is too long, the subject, predicate and object will be unclear? But no matter what, Da Da is definitely talented! It's just that this talent may not be all-encompassing. The wife's sense of atmosphere and control of the protagonist, the delicate description of emotions, the excellent metaphors and descriptions, the psychological grasp and mutual testing are all very well written. Of course, these are just my personal opinions and may not be accurate. Anyway, this kind of CP, which I never dared to think about before, can actually be written in such a way that people say it smells really good. It's really great!! I look forward to writing better and better~
So Gojo Satoru is the one above, hahahaha
If the needle doesn't poke, it's just intrigue and throwing the dice hahahahahahahahaha
Great writing is a meeting of God's will. The scene of Sasuke-kun holding Dr. Glass and running under the moonlight was so beautiful that it moved me so much that I can remember it for a long time.
Rolling dice or something is too delicious, right?
This last setting is so interesting. The position... Is it the position I thought of, who wins and who is on the left?
It's the first time my wife has written it. It's great. I like Sasuke here very much. It's really difficult to make Sasuke fall in love. No matter who he is with, he feels inappropriate. Probably because of the character setting (I was very happy when I was very young. I chased Itachi and saw Itachi as my target. Later, he was exterminated and manipulated to hate me. After revenge, he learned the truth, but no one will do it anymore. He led the way, he achieved the ultimate goal, but lost it again. I think it was probably around that time that he started to really learn to decide for himself what to do next.) So later on, even if he married Sakura and had children, he still felt that it was ridiculous → The character's personality is not OOC, but the direction is a bit OOC (I don't mean to feel bad about Sakura)
Although wtw is a strange man who will not make people think OOC no matter how he writes it, it is very difficult for him to actually fall in love with anyone, and everyone will pull it off (not to mention when I saw the plot of the comic until wtw was sealed → I said: ????, I didn't read it anymore, if wtw comes out, enthusiastic friends remember to text me)
It's incredible that two people who have nothing to do with love can actually get together, and the characters are not too broken. (Although some plots are indeed not handled well, I can't think of a better way for them to understand each other, agree with each other, and then fall in love → Madam, if you have new ideas to revise the article in the future, I will write it again. If there are fairy sisters who have new ideas, please tt me, so that I can be impressed)
From the time I put it in my favorites, I have updated about sixty chapters. After that, I stayed up late every night updating it (I couldn't fall asleep without watching it, I wanted to know the plot so much). Now that I have finished updating the main text, and I am following the second chapter, I just want to shout out: Madam, you can do it! Rice rice! Hungry! Modo Modo!!
People will die if they are killed. What is it if they are not inferior in skills?? As expected of you, Uchiha Sasuke!! And can there be more scenes like throwing dice?
I'm so happy. It's been a long time since I've read an article and not felt sad but still very happy.
Rolling dice is so delicious!!! Ahhhh, I really want to watch more extras!!!!
In fact, I think Da Da's writing style is very good, and he should be able to write a gentle emotional flow very well. However, the narrative habits may be adjusted again. Except for some excessive flashbacks, in some sentences-especially those using two dashes, if the writing is too long, the subject, predicate and object will be unclear? But no matter what, Da Da is definitely talented! It's just that this talent may not be all-encompassing. The wife's sense of atmosphere and control of the protagonist, the delicate description of emotions, the excellent metaphors and descriptions, the psychological grasp and mutual testing are all very well written. Of course, these are just my personal opinions and may not be accurate. Anyway, this kind of CP, which I never dared to think about before, can actually be written in such a way that people say it smells really good. It's really great!! I look forward to writing better and better~
So Gojo Satoru is the one above, hahahaha
If the needle doesn't poke, it's just intrigue and throwing the dice hahahahahahahahaha
Great writing is a meeting of God's will. The scene of Sasuke-kun holding Dr. Glass and running under the moonlight was so beautiful that it moved me so much that I can remember it for a long time.
Rolling dice or something is too delicious, right?
This last setting is so interesting. The position... Is it the position I thought of, who wins and who is on the left?
It's the first time my wife has written it. It's great. I like Sasuke here very much. It's really difficult to make Sasuke fall in love. No matter who he is with, he feels inappropriate. Probably because of the character setting (I was very happy when I was very young. I chased Itachi and saw Itachi as my target. Later, he was exterminated and manipulated to hate me. After revenge, he learned the truth, but no one will do it anymore. He led the way, he achieved the ultimate goal, but lost it again. I think it was probably around that time that he started to really learn to decide for himself what to do next.) So later on, even if he married Sakura and had children, he still felt that it was ridiculous → The character's personality is not OOC, but the direction is a bit OOC (I don't mean to feel bad about Sakura) Although wtw is a strange man who will not make people think OOC no matter how he writes it, it is very difficult for him to actually fall in love with anyone, and everyone will pull it off (not to mention when I saw the plot of the comic until wtw was sealed → I said: ????, I didn't read it anymore, if wtw comes out, enthusiastic friends remember to text me) It's incredible that two people who have nothing to do with love can actually get together, and the characters are not too broken. (Although some plots are indeed not handled well, I can't think of a better way for them to understand each other, agree with each other, and then fall in love → Madam, if you have new ideas to revise the article in the future, I will write it again. If there are fairy sisters who have new ideas, please tt me, so that I can be impressed) From the time I put it in my favorites, I have updated about sixty chapters. After that, I stayed up late every night updating it (I couldn't fall asleep without watching it, I wanted to know the plot so much). Now that I have finished updating the main text, and I am following the second chapter, I just want to shout out: Madam, you can do it! Rice rice! Hungry! Modo Modo!!