Red Thorn Fragrance

Haha, I somehow found this article. It feels more like prose than a novel. I have also read the comments below and feel the same way. You said it was your first time trying it and it was already good. Haha, let me just give you my opinion: too much form and too little emotion. The form should always serve the emotion in the text. If you pay too much attention to the neatness of the form, it will be a bit like what was said downstairs, a bit delicate. Sweat first, keep up the good work! Does that last sentence mean "quietly"?

What should I say? It seems that after reading your article, I also read other people's comments on you. I think it's pretty good. Overall, the theme is very complete, but the details are not enough!

The conciseness and conciseness of the text and the smoothness of the writing are its advantages. The description is a little bit artificial. Although the theme is left, it cannot make a deep impression on people.

At over a thousand words, it is indeed very short. Hehe. In this article, the characters are erratic and the image is not clear. The author expresses too much, the text does not have enough tension, does not contain much, and leaves little for the reader. The scene where the three men are the one she loves most is quite nice. Just write with a little bit in your mouth.