With Whom Shall I Hide?

Now that Da Da has said it, I would like to make some comments: the whole article is just a reluctant description of Da Da's conceived plot. The language is bland and tasteless. All the characters appear in a hurry and leave in a hurry. They have no features to remember and no personality to make people happy. Even the male and female protagonists are so thin and flat. Even though the plot of the story is simple, if there is a better entry point, the atmosphere when the heroine disappears can be made more complicated and confusing, and the search process of the hero can be made more magnificent, torturous, difficult, and unpredictable. , Writing the most important feelings with a light pen, mixing the anxious longing, heartache and loneliness in the thousands of miles of search, mixed with the wind and rain in the rivers and lakes, and slowly touching people's hearts. The characters should be much more three-dimensional and full, and the plot will not be so pale. Please bear with me if I have any small comments.