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In the game, Fang Wei is the top assassin on the server, with dazzling moves and technique pushed to the limit. He has few rivals in the arena.
But across the server, Fang Wei is also a hated enemy of the martial world with countless foes, all longing to kill him.
As luck would have it, one day a slip-up in his controls left Fang Wei driven by his enemies all the way to the Cliff of Broken Souls. Even trapped in such a desperate situation, Fang Wei used his incredible skills to turn the tables and escape danger.
Just as he was about to get away, someone swooped in and landed the killing blow.
The killer was none other than Fang Wei's nemesis, Hu Wuren, who had held the arena's number-one ranking for years.
The culprit merely tossed out a casual, "I just happened to be passing by."
Looking at the damage panel and its fatal 666 damage, Fang Wei trembled with rage.
How could he put up with that?
Fang Wei immediately added him to his nemesis list.
Hu Wuren, who had been about to pay for the cost of repairing his gear: ?
Fang Wei was so angry he was about to log off when a request to become his disciple suddenly arrived. It was from a cute little girl who was clearly a newbie.
And so Fang Wei acquired a lovely female disciple.
Huh? A guy?
No matter. Fang Wei had never taken on a disciple before, and he said, "Having a disciple is what counts."
Fang Wei and his disciple went about their days, chatting about everything under the sun.
Master: Hey, disciple, I got hired on the spot at an interview today!
Disciple: Mm.
Master: Hey, disciple, it turns out our director lives across from me! He's so nice, he often gives me a ride to and from work!
Disciple: Mm.
Master: Hey, disciple, our director is so handsome, and his figure is amazing. He's even got abs. I wonder what they'd feel like.
Disciple: Why not touch them and see?
Master: ?
In the real world, Fang Wei is a socially anxious shut-in. After interviewing at several companies, he unexpectedly hit the jackpot and was hired on the spot by the head of a leading company in the industry.
It's just that the boss looks incredibly hard to get along with.
Fang Wei: There are so many talented coworkers, so why are you always picking on me?
Mu Yunsheng: It's because the boss thinks highly of you.
Fang Wei: Then why do I have to go on business trips with you? Don't you have an assistant?
Mu Yunsheng: The company is investing in your development.
Fang Wei: But why do I still have to be with you after work?
Mu Yunsheng narrowed his eyes: You don't want to?
Fang Wei: ...Can I say no?
Mu Yunsheng: No.
Fang Wei had no choice but to follow the director around every day, playing the part of his obedient little sidekick...
Then one day, he suddenly saw the game login screen on his boss's computer.
Fang Wei awkwardly scratched his head: ...Hahaha, Director, you play this game too? Hey, your character looks just like my disciple, hahaha...ha?????
Mu Yunsheng: Master, didn't you want to feel my muscles?
Fang Wei: ?
Fang Wei: This is the guy! He keeps bullying me in the game, but outside the game he often drives me home, cooks for me, spoils me rotten until I'm useless, and keeps taking his clothes off in front of me! TAT
Mu Yunsheng: What should I do if I took my subordinate as my disciple? I'm not necessarily online, but this is pretty urgent.
A serious-minded, elite industry insider, scheming disciple seme x a talkative master uke with an unusual train of thought, and a top-tier gaming expert
Mu Yunsheng x Fang Wei, 1v1, happy ending
The game is based on a real one, with lots of original elements added.
Mu Yunsheng = Hu Wuren / Guannan
Fang Wei = Fang Daxi / Fang Erxi
Theme: Be careful what you say online.
I can't write down the final score and post it here. Overall, it's a pretty good little sweet story, but I found it quite unpleasant. I stepped on a lot of mistakes. Fang Fang is very cute and that's why I persisted. The following are all complaints and involve a lot of spoilers, so don't read if you mind.
Firstly, this article is very suicidal. It keeps giving charms and skill points to Gong, but at the same time, it makes Fangfang feel inferior all the time. Haha, especially the real names and screen names of the two protagonists have always made me very unhappy. I can tell at a glance who is perfunctory and who is serious. Secondly, Gong has always been very yin and yang and used various words to accuse me, which is really annoying. Annoying, he was like this before falling in love and still like this after falling in love. It was obvious that he was attracted to Fang Fang first and took the initiative to tease Fang Fang. He even knew that Fang Fang liked him through his apprentice, Ma Jia. But in the end, because he had never confessed to him and was always confessed to, he was unwilling to confess first and insisted on forcing Fang Fang to confess first. Moreover, when he had not confessed to him, he was unwilling to confess first. Just kiss Fang Fang directly. It's so disgusting that the whole text gives me the feeling that Fang Fang is being pua'd all the time. Thirdly, the attack on the mouth is really poisonous, and he keeps being weird. However, the author also arranges for Fang Fang to think that he is very good-looking, and his anger will be relieved as soon as he sees his face. This happened many times. This kind of plot disgusts me. The text says that Gong spoils Fang Fang and turns him into a loser. It turns out that Fang Fang has been tolerating him and obeying him in all aspects, and even made Fang Fang say that he volunteered to be bullied by him. On the contrary, Gong has always been very domineering, both inside and outside the game, using various means to make Fang Fang have to obey him in the end. Wow.
In addition, he is really good at attacking double standards. While asking Fang Fang not to label him, he labels Fang Fang himself at the same time. He must be sick! Moreover, this person is really jealous. He was originally a cute xql, but when he gets jealous, he ignores others and treats the other party as lukewarm. This made Fang Fang sad many times and made him sick to death. Especially when the author describes this relationship, Fang Fang has always felt low self-esteem, saying that she is not worthy of him, wants to support him and is not as beautiful as his cousin. On the other hand, Gong is very confident and has never had these thoughts. It makes Fang Fang even more uncomfortable. He wants to hug Fang Fang and tell him that he is fine [split][split]
Talking about that Peng Feiyu almost pissed me off. Fang Fang once had a crush on this person. He said that he was not his first love, and then what did he say, if he had known that you would also fall in love with him? ? ! ! Be sick! Fang Fang has always had low self-esteem because he was injured, and Gong always belittled him. He just let Fang Fang misunderstand him without explaining his thoughts to Fang Fang. He was so angry that he was so angry that he was so angry.
In addition, I feel that the author has written for too long and completely forgot about the foreshadowing he laid. Fang Fang lived with his grandmother when he was a child. He did not dare to ask the person on the other end of the phone (I guess it was his mother or something) for money. He was very short of money and kept working hard to make money. All these reasons (later it completely turned into Fang Fang wanting to work hard to make money to support her boyfriend. After that, you didn't even want to mention Fang Fang's other relatives alive). What is Fang Fang's family situation? (Full text Fang Fang It's outrageous that her parents never appeared or even mentioned by Fang Fang), how did Fang Fang and these relatives and friends know each other, how did they become relatives and friends, what is the situation with the pair of deputy CP Xiao Bei, Xiao Bei seems to be a high-ranking player, but has very few roles, how do relatives and friends know Fang Fang's sexual orientation? Since Fang Fang knows that he is a gay, why did Fang Fang not show any signs of his previous psychological activities and did not realize that the director was flirting with him, and also told his apprentice that he was straight? There were so many foreshadowings that I felt I could fully describe, but ended up with nothing. What's going on with the Qi family, what's going on with the Lu family, these are all written a little bit but not written at all. I couldn't believe it when I saw the ending. Apart from the fact that Gong and Shou were together, it felt like they weren't even finished. Fang Fang didn't even bring Gong to meet his parents at the end.
And as time goes by, there are more and more secondary CPs, and each pair has to be inserted with a little description, which is very annoying [changed] [changed]
Finally, author, do you think there is any relationship between your main text and the title? It turns out that the whole server was complaining about CP when it reached Chapter 60 or 70. The whole server was scolding the two stupid male CSs. If you had told me earlier, I would not read it. Moreover, the incident of Yi Renxiao has never been explained. Fang Fang suffered so many grievances because of this person being misunderstood as a mistress, but he never took care of it. He did not even think about clarifying and dealing with this artificial Haruka. Fang Fang killed him in the game to take revenge, and also Gong was scolded for causing trouble everywhere, and even made the relationship public after falling in love. Gong still hasn't dealt with this. He is not even willing to go to the forum to post a clarification that you and Yi Renxiao have nothing to do with each other. In reality, Yi Renxiao pestered Gong many times and even came to disturb Fang Fang at Gong's birthday party. Gong actually said that he was young, so he did not call the police or deal with it, and only asked people to take him out. Awesome, you are so arrogant! [Cracked][Cracked][Cracked] And there are a lot of comments in the forum that like to attack, a lot! There is also a statement about accepting the attack because you like to attack, it's just rubbish! The last few chapters came out of nowhere because Fang Fang's voice was soft and cute, so many people suddenly said they liked it, which was also bizarre. I liked the gang members protecting Fang Fang, but the length was too short, and there was not much content about how Fang Fang got along with them. It was just a speech about how Fang Fang got along with them. It was just a speech about how Fang Fang got along with them, so I couldn't understand why I just accepted it. It was too jumpy. I saw my subway, grandpa, and mobile phone [melted] [melted] [melted]
Uh, it's over like this [Loading] When I read the copy, I thought that horse falling would be an important node in the development of relationships. Fang Fang became angry because he was deceived, but it ended like this? Fang, you are too in love and too easy to coax, right? [Changed]
Watched it in one go ✧(≖◡≖✿)Little Couple 991
Regarding word of mouth, I don't understand why Idiot Qi thinks that these two are being bullied and wants Fang Fang to take care of him [changed]
Emmm, I don't really like this kind of person who is obviously interested in flirting with someone first and then insists on forcing them to confess.,, Have you confessed, then you'll kiss [turn it][turn it]
Is there any extra story, please?
I really want to eat some sub-CP, is there any extra?
Dear author, I feel like there are quite a few sub-CPs. Is there a chance to write a book? [Please] The characters of the sub-CPs are very interesting! ! Will it? Will it!
It doesn't matter if you don't have a red envelope. Will there be any extras if the author has it? [Please] I'm really looking forward to it [Love Eyes]
Author, your writing is very, very good [please] very very good [please] I really like this kind of forum style, the taste is very positive, and the emotional lines are also very delicate! I like it very much! ! ! I really like it! ! ! ! Is there going to be a side story? [Please] Please, can there be a side story? I also want to see [Hold the Thigh]. It's really, really well written! ! ! My words are too flat to express my love three-dimensionally, but I really like [love eyes] [love eyes] [love eyes]
I can't write down the final score and post it here. Overall, it's a pretty good little sweet story, but I found it quite unpleasant. I stepped on a lot of mistakes. Fang Fang is very cute and that's why I persisted. The following are all complaints and involve a lot of spoilers, so don't read if you mind. Firstly, this article is very suicidal. It keeps giving charms and skill points to Gong, but at the same time, it makes Fangfang feel inferior all the time. Haha, especially the real names and screen names of the two protagonists have always made me very unhappy. I can tell at a glance who is perfunctory and who is serious. Secondly, Gong has always been very yin and yang and used various words to accuse me, which is really annoying. Annoying, he was like this before falling in love and still like this after falling in love. It was obvious that he was attracted to Fang Fang first and took the initiative to tease Fang Fang. He even knew that Fang Fang liked him through his apprentice, Ma Jia. But in the end, because he had never confessed to him and was always confessed to, he was unwilling to confess first and insisted on forcing Fang Fang to confess first. Moreover, when he had not confessed to him, he was unwilling to confess first. Just kiss Fang Fang directly. It's so disgusting that the whole text gives me the feeling that Fang Fang is being pua'd all the time. Thirdly, the attack on the mouth is really poisonous, and he keeps being weird. However, the author also arranges for Fang Fang to think that he is very good-looking, and his anger will be relieved as soon as he sees his face. This happened many times. This kind of plot disgusts me. The text says that Gong spoils Fang Fang and turns him into a loser. It turns out that Fang Fang has been tolerating him and obeying him in all aspects, and even made Fang Fang say that he volunteered to be bullied by him. On the contrary, Gong has always been very domineering, both inside and outside the game, using various means to make Fang Fang have to obey him in the end. Wow. In addition, he is really good at attacking double standards. While asking Fang Fang not to label him, he labels Fang Fang himself at the same time. He must be sick! Moreover, this person is really jealous. He was originally a cute xql, but when he gets jealous, he ignores others and treats the other party as lukewarm. This made Fang Fang sad many times and made him sick to death. Especially when the author describes this relationship, Fang Fang has always felt low self-esteem, saying that she is not worthy of him, wants to support him and is not as beautiful as his cousin. On the other hand, Gong is very confident and has never had these thoughts. It makes Fang Fang even more uncomfortable. He wants to hug Fang Fang and tell him that he is fine [split][split] Talking about that Peng Feiyu almost pissed me off. Fang Fang once had a crush on this person. He said that he was not his first love, and then what did he say, if he had known that you would also fall in love with him? ? ! ! Be sick! Fang Fang has always had low self-esteem because he was injured, and Gong always belittled him. He just let Fang Fang misunderstand him without explaining his thoughts to Fang Fang. He was so angry that he was so angry that he was so angry. In addition, I feel that the author has written for too long and completely forgot about the foreshadowing he laid. Fang Fang lived with his grandmother when he was a child. He did not dare to ask the person on the other end of the phone (I guess it was his mother or something) for money. He was very short of money and kept working hard to make money. All these reasons (later it completely turned into Fang Fang wanting to work hard to make money to support her boyfriend. After that, you didn't even want to mention Fang Fang's other relatives alive). What is Fang Fang's family situation? (Full text Fang Fang It's outrageous that her parents never appeared or even mentioned by Fang Fang), how did Fang Fang and these relatives and friends know each other, how did they become relatives and friends, what is the situation with the pair of deputy CP Xiao Bei, Xiao Bei seems to be a high-ranking player, but has very few roles, how do relatives and friends know Fang Fang's sexual orientation? Since Fang Fang knows that he is a gay, why did Fang Fang not show any signs of his previous psychological activities and did not realize that the director was flirting with him, and also told his apprentice that he was straight? There were so many foreshadowings that I felt I could fully describe, but ended up with nothing. What's going on with the Qi family, what's going on with the Lu family, these are all written a little bit but not written at all. I couldn't believe it when I saw the ending. Apart from the fact that Gong and Shou were together, it felt like they weren't even finished. Fang Fang didn't even bring Gong to meet his parents at the end. And as time goes by, there are more and more secondary CPs, and each pair has to be inserted with a little description, which is very annoying [changed] [changed] Finally, author, do you think there is any relationship between your main text and the title? It turns out that the whole server was complaining about CP when it reached Chapter 60 or 70. The whole server was scolding the two stupid male CSs. If you had told me earlier, I would not read it. Moreover, the incident of Yi Renxiao has never been explained. Fang Fang suffered so many grievances because of this person being misunderstood as a mistress, but he never took care of it. He did not even think about clarifying and dealing with this artificial Haruka. Fang Fang killed him in the game to take revenge, and also Gong was scolded for causing trouble everywhere, and even made the relationship public after falling in love. Gong still hasn't dealt with this. He is not even willing to go to the forum to post a clarification that you and Yi Renxiao have nothing to do with each other. In reality, Yi Renxiao pestered Gong many times and even came to disturb Fang Fang at Gong's birthday party. Gong actually said that he was young, so he did not call the police or deal with it, and only asked people to take him out. Awesome, you are so arrogant! [Cracked][Cracked][Cracked] And there are a lot of comments in the forum that like to attack, a lot! There is also a statement about accepting the attack because you like to attack, it's just rubbish! The last few chapters came out of nowhere because Fang Fang's voice was soft and cute, so many people suddenly said they liked it, which was also bizarre. I liked the gang members protecting Fang Fang, but the length was too short, and there was not much content about how Fang Fang got along with them. It was just a speech about how Fang Fang got along with them. It was just a speech about how Fang Fang got along with them, so I couldn't understand why I just accepted it. It was too jumpy. I saw my subway, grandpa, and mobile phone [melted] [melted] [melted]
Uh, it's over like this [Loading] When I read the copy, I thought that horse falling would be an important node in the development of relationships. Fang Fang became angry because he was deceived, but it ended like this? Fang, you are too in love and too easy to coax, right? [Changed]
Watched it in one go ✧(≖◡≖✿)Little Couple 991
Regarding word of mouth, I don't understand why Idiot Qi thinks that these two are being bullied and wants Fang Fang to take care of him [changed]
Emmm, I don't really like this kind of person who is obviously interested in flirting with someone first and then insists on forcing them to confess.,, Have you confessed, then you'll kiss [turn it][turn it]
Is there any extra story, please?
I really want to eat some sub-CP, is there any extra?
Dear author, I feel like there are quite a few sub-CPs. Is there a chance to write a book? [Please] The characters of the sub-CPs are very interesting! ! Will it? Will it!
It doesn't matter if you don't have a red envelope. Will there be any extras if the author has it? [Please] I'm really looking forward to it [Love Eyes]
Author, your writing is very, very good [please] very very good [please] I really like this kind of forum style, the taste is very positive, and the emotional lines are also very delicate! I like it very much! ! ! I really like it! ! ! ! Is there going to be a side story? [Please] Please, can there be a side story? I also want to see [Hold the Thigh]. It's really, really well written! ! ! My words are too flat to express my love three-dimensionally, but I really like [love eyes] [love eyes] [love eyes]