[Harry Potter] Fond

Long comment Congratulations to my wife for finishing it. As a reader who discovered this treasure in the first five chapters and keeps up with it every day, I originally wanted to write a long review during the Ronan x Remus extra chapter as a celebration of the ending. However, I am too busy in the third dimension and have postponed writing until now. I feel ashamed. First of all, I want to blow the author's rainbow fart. You are truly the most diligent and conscientious author I have ever seen. You wrote nearly 500,000 words in just three months. Not to mention daily updates, you update more every day, and the articles are free. Your diligence alone is not enough to blow a rainbow fart a hundred times. Every day I lament what kind of magical author this is. After finishing my chores every day, I am sure to see updates as soon as I open Jinjiang. To come across this article is simply the greatest luck I have read in recent years. After bragging about the author's update speed, we have to brag about the content of the article written by the author's masterful hand. "Fond" is undoubtedly an excellent HP fanfic in my opinion. The writing is smooth, the plot is reasonable, the content is interesting, and it is unconventional. It does it all. Regarding the creation of the protagonist, I personally think this is the biggest highlight of this article. At the beginning, Luo Nan (one of the protagonists) travels through time. When I saw this, I thought this article would follow the old trope of HP fan fiction that has been written badly. Unexpectedly, in the later chapters, there were only a few popular characters of the era. Without focusing on describing them, the interaction between the two original characters Luo Nan and Ersi alone can make people want to read more. There are no fancy words, only a straightforward description of the interaction between the two (with some Internet slang brought by Luo Nan in the 21st century added to the writing fun), but it does not make people feel stiff at all. With the foreshadowing of the two original protagonists in the previous chapters, the character's character leaps onto the page, vivid and natural. In terms of characterization, the author gives people a sense of being able to cope with anything. Especially when describing the time traveler Luo Nan, he does not give people the feeling that the character is separated from the background of HP. The protagonist goes from discovering time travel to accepting it, and then making friends as an opportunity to integrate into the magical world. The logic is complete, and I did not feel like I was in a drama at all when reading the article. Luo Nan is kind, brave, straightforward with a "modern flavor", unforgiving in words, but at the same time soft in heart, gentle to everyone, and occasionally hits various "straight shots", which not only captures the male protagonist Remus, but also captures me as a reader. She doesn't have the arrogance of a time traveler, but is friendly to her friends, but she is not indecisive when dealing with people she doesn't like, and has a sense of propriety. I think there is no one who dislikes such a girl. Luo Nan can be said to be my favorite heroine among the HP fanfics I have read - no one. In terms of the original character creation of this article, another surprise, or the biggest surprise, in my opinion, is the 'brother and sister' pair of Erth and Ptasi. As the other protagonist of this double heroine story, Urs is softer and more tolerant than Luo Nan's straightforward personality. She responds to almost every request from her friends and is considerate. Apart from confessing to beautiful people on the spot when she sees them, she is completely a Hufflepuff. In the early stage, Snape's retreat when he frequently offended her also made me a little impatient, but as the plot developed, she joined the Quidditch team and became a beater, acted as a 'fake couple' with Sirius, and selected Ronan's 'favorite guests' with Lily, which made people see her less 'Hufflepuff' side - quirky, sincere, wise and brave. These aspects together constitute the girl who attracted Sirius in the later period, Dumbledore's favorite (and scourge) student, Hufflepuff's reliable senior sister, and the goddess in my eyes as a reader. She may not amaze everyone at first, but as the person who has grown the most in the novel, her unique charm makes those who love her infinitely addicted and fall in love with her even more deeply - just like the 'really fragrant' Sirius in the novel - no one can reject the true beauty, just like no one can dislike her after getting to know Erth. The other original character, Ptasi, is even more convincing. The author made him appear as the big brother next door who loves his sister (but he is good-looking and has great grades). He is amiable and likable, but in the end, he exits as a paranoid and dark villain. Such a big reversal in two episodes should have been contradictory and abrupt, but under the author's brilliant character setting, it is reasonable and reasonable, so that the character does not deviate from its own logic, and the transition of personality is natural and smooth. And this makes Ptasi's character more three-dimensional, no longer a "paper man" with facial makeup and labeling. , And truly became a flesh-and-blood, complex and changeable 'Kent Family Head' In terms of removing "labeling" and "facializing", the author has also done a great job in describing other supporting characters, whether it is Regulus who shouldered the pressure of the family, Peter Pedillo who finally became a traitor, or Red who was just a catalyst for the relationship between Ronan and Remus at the beginning. In the later period, they completely became a flesh-and-blood "person" instead of a "paper man". They have their own lives, which do not revolve around the protagonist, nor do they force their minds to deviate from the logic of their own characters. Yes, logic, the biggest highlight of this article, what attracts me the most and makes me pursue it all the way here is [logic]. It can be said that there are very few logical flaws in the whole novel. This also makes the protagonists and their CPs completely free of the embarrassment of forced sugaring. Especially for the pair of Luo Nan and Remus, the two are tolerant and complementary to each other. The interaction between them is not obtrusive at all, and there is no artificial saccharin flavor at all. I just feel that this is how it should be, and they are a perfect match. The descriptions of the popular characters, the Reavers, are also very good. James is flamboyant, Sirius is chic, Remus is calm, and Peter is a bit out of place, but James will help him blend in (this also highlights James' generosity towards his friends) The portrayal of the lily Lily Evans and the young professor Severus Snape also have their own characteristics. Snape was written quite interestingly by the author. The author did not fall into the cliché of completely 'whitewashing' him, but described him normally, showing his gloomy, unpleasant, and dark side, and making him show his kind, contradictory, and regretful side. Lily is not the so-called 'heartthrob' in this article. She is a little arrogant and dogmatic, but she is warm and friendly towards her friends. This also makes her more real than some flawless 'heartthrob'. In terms of plot, the characters and plot complement each other and jointly build a real pro-era. The ending is the most unexpected, but it is also reasonable. While making people cry for the author, they have to agree with the rationality of the ending. Indeed, the pro era is cruel and full of sacrifices. Although it is beautiful, it is ultimately incomplete beauty, which makes this era so charming. Finally, I would like to thank the author again for telling a group portrait story that is pro-era, and for creating so many characters with distinctive personalities and vivid images. Yes, "Fond" is a group portrait article in my eyes, not just the protagonist. As an ordinary HP fanfic lover, I am really lucky to encounter such an excellent pro-era story. I also hope that this article and the author can be discovered by more people. At the same time, I sincerely wish the author to have a happy writing, a smooth life, and be happy every day.

As expected of Sirius, he is such a bitch and deserves to be single! My fists became hardened when I saw her. If Ersi were my little sister, I would also punch him more than once like Luo Nan.

It's too sharp. If I could, I'd want to skewer Peter, Voldemort, and Ptasi, roast them on a fire, and then throw them into the toilet to soak!

Ahem, it looks best when a reserved man goes crazy.

I feel that the lines between Ronan and Remus are more delicate and have progressive emotions. I feel that there are too many things in Urs's line, which is a bit boring to read, but my wife's writing is really good, and the plot and writing are excellent.

Can you please stop being entangled with Ptasi? I understand that it is the third party that promotes the relationship, but can you change someone else? It's okay to make up one in Hufflepuff. I am entangled with Ptasi every day.

Luo Nan came back and was about to beat someone up but found that there was no one to beat (no)

I saw it! But what I'm a little confused about is how to get the timeline. When Remus wears it, the world merges. Isn't it true that Ronan and Remus are still very young, but everyone else in his generation has become middle-aged (touching chin)

Snape: Everyone is working against me today, and the potion doesn't smell good anymore (the potion didn't smell good in the first place)

Luo Nan is really good at scolding people.