My power is so great that even God fears me, yet I keep a low profile in everyday life. When I get pushed around down here, I go to Heaven and take it up with the gods. I came to the Naruto world just for fun. The tailed beasts look at me like I'm their ancestor. At first, I was the second-biggest loser, but eventually I couldn't hold back and revealed my true strength! Ever since the battle with Orochimaru in the Forest of Death, that unlucky kid has had it so bad that even human traffickers are picking on him. Uchiha Madara, we're cut from the same cloth! We've both been keeping such a low profile! What? The Akatsuki wants to summon the Lord of the Underworld? That little brat I used to bully? Damn it, do you think I'm invisible or something?
Huh? Another space-time portal has opened! Naruto's brothers and sisters, you're joining in on the fun too! This place is... The Prince of Tennis! I transferred from Seigaku to Hyotei, then from Hyotei to Rikkai. No more transfers. I need to put down roots somewhere! What, you want my parents to come in? Get someone from the Akatsuki to fill in! It's true, my family is full of weirdos. Um... The Prince of Tennis world is in an uproar!
What's going on? Someone from The Prince of Tennis has gone missing! And someone from Naruto has come over again! Hurry up and fix this mess. We can't let things keep going like this! Zero-Tails, that giant monster, is attacking The Prince of Tennis. I'll take it on! A bunch of ninjas who don't know the law? Arrest them! Bring back the Prince of Tennis characters who got lost in the Naruto world! The Akatsuki and Konoha are working together for the first time. Very good, very good... Nobody got hurt, right? Boo hoo hoo... I have to compensate the creator gods of two three-dimensional worlds for their losses. It's my first time doing a god's job.
This is a story with an all-powerful heroine. If you don't like that, don't read it. It's not Mary Sue. If you still think it's a Mary Sue story, please take a close look at the Mary Sue entry on Baidu Baike.
This is my first story, and the first half is pretty amateurish. Please forgive me; I'm too lazy to revise it.
Also, this story has a sequel!
Purpose:
Su Wen is not guilty, but please pay attention to the lower limit
One point was given. This comment has both likes and dislikes, and there is absolutely no malice in it.
The following is a Naruto fan for 6+ years. But the age of entering the fandom is only two years. So in the process of constantly looking for articles, I found this article below.
Looking through the copy room, first of all, please let me express my utmost respect to the author. After all, the copywriting was only superficial, so I clicked on the article twitchingly. But I'm sorry, because I also owe a lot of mistakes, so I can't finish it.
If the heroine is the night spirit, with blue hair and pink eyes, even if I am studying art design, it is difficult to imagine what kind of effect it will be. Two different colors, even if they look beautiful alone, they are a failure as a combination. However, the only person who could think that this was the image of an angel was Naruto at that time.
For those of you who have not read this article, I do not dare to comment too much on the plot of the story, but please allow me to make some trivial comments on the author's great writing and words. I will be grateful.
I'm just a little scumbag author, so I'm just expressing my opinions.
First of all, I don't think Da Da's writing style is very rigorous. Language, phrasing, etc. Are arbitrary and excessive. It may be to make the writing style relaxed, but a relaxed writing style does not mean that you can use overly casual sentences arbitrarily. Personally, I think that the so-called relaxed writing style is also based on a rigorous foundation. After all, too many casual statements are also a kind of irresponsibility, whether to others or to oneself.
Then we will talk about what the following topic wants to express.
In my opinion, Mary Sue is not a fault. The slightly restrained Su Meizi is actually a subconscious pursuit of the author. It is a manifestation of wanting to be strong, wanting to be perfect, and wanting to be loved by the people you like. There is absolutely nothing wrong with this. In other words, I have unilaterally affirmed Su Wen, because they are the true reflection of the young author's heart.
However, the word "comprehensive" must not have been added before.
Everything has a lower limit, this is the most basic.
In the author's article, the spirit girl has the power to defeat God. I sincerely pray that there are no devout Catholic believers among the people who read this article. Amen. I didn't continue to read it, so I don't know if Sakyamuni and the main god of Tianyu were tamed by Lingmei, I guess not. Even if there is, it doesn't matter. After all, Pluto Tongzi is also despised by Ling Meizi. Besides, Ling Meizi is too arrogant.
In summary, Ling Meizi has replaced Master Bei and become a humanoid life form standing at the top of the food chain. ←What's wrong! .
In addition, although it is summarized, it does not mean that the nonsense below is over.
The following problem seems to be more serious than Mary Sue.
The first thing I want to affirm below is your bold idea, the author. It is not derogatory, it is a sincere affirmation. I also refer to the comments of other readers below to get a rough idea of the author's ideas, and I don't find them annoying. But...
The character is broken and I can't bear it.
While I am a fangirl, I am also a devout Naruto fan. I understand that it is normal for fan authors to experience slight collapse when they are brainstorming. This is nothing, and I understand this deeply. However, the characters under the author's control...
At least from what I see below, Kakashi-senpai's biological parents are more like you, the author, than Masashi Kishimoto. Neither is the third-generation grandfather, nor is the gentle fourth-generation. Well, sir, I would like to ask you, sir, why don't you write an original article and instead attack "NARUTO"? Naruto is okay, at least there is no big problem in what I see below. At least in the first few chapters, it is well reflected that Naruto's desire for attention and care as a child, and his excitement when receiving the love and recognition of others, are very good and worthy of praise.
I didn't see the back part, but I seemed to have discovered that the Akatsuki organization would appear, so I didn't plan to continue watching, because my favorite was Brother Itachi, and I didn't want to see the strange Brother Itachi "intruding".
I'm just an ordinary Naruto fan who is mixed up in the same circle.
In addition, at the end, I would like to express a final point of view. I believe that fan fiction is just something that the author imagined as his favorite work, but happened to be accepted by most people. Everyone starts writing articles out of love for the original work, so even if they are just thinking about it, they should also carefully figure out the heart and personality of the original characters. For example, what would this person do when encountering a certain situation?
Even if the author's unilateral thoughts are brought in, at least it must be ensured that Kakashi is still Kakashi, the third generation is still the third generation, and the fourth generation Minato is still the gentle and great man.
Otherwise, they wouldn't be them anymore, so would they still be considered colleagues?
Hmm... I only know this much. If there is something wrong, please come back and I will accept it all!
It's 2020 and I'm here again to review the tricks I did in elementary school! ! The author of Crab Crab has brought me into the pit of Internet King. After the new network game national server was launched, I suddenly remembered this article and came to do some archaeology——
Emmmmm, what can I say? This article is my entry into the fandom. It is not just a Naruto fandom. I remember it was three or four years ago, on the right side of that webpage. At that time, I remember that I just wanted to watch Naruto anime, but accidentally clicked on this article. I remember reading it with gusto, and felt that this was the most interesting article I had ever read. Now it looks so pure and cute when I look at my childhood:)
I rub yuanfeinuoxyuan, isn't it the name of nuoxyuan pill?
The new pit is not bad, but a bit shocking [I have finished watching it]
After reading this article! It's a very relaxing article! I just want to say something: Dad, you are so talented!
Xiao Fu brings "I am the Scorpion of Red Sand" and "Naruto: Chiyuki Legend" to advertise!
Talk about not being a bully or a diver!
I left a comment and said that I found this article in Paipai Novels. After finishing it, I came directly to Jinjiang. I said that I love complaining about Honkai Impact. Come on, the author! Yes, I will collect it in BG.
It's pretty good, but it just feels "unexpected"...
It feels like it's just fun, no plot...
Is this article funny? Why did I just know about it? Well, actually, I was just looking for articles about male pigs and Madara...
To be honest, I don't really like this kind of prank, it's a bit gratuitous, isn't it?
By the way, it is indeed a god-like existence, although it is not a god... Although I don't like female pigs too much...
But there are too few articles about Madara...
But to be honest, this article, although it is very EG, is not my favorite type (how old are you when you are looking for a boyfriend?), But this article is very good, really, after all, it is my first time to read this type of article patiently, not to mention it has more than a hundred chapters.
So this article is just for my entertainment. Well, I haven't read it yet, but I'll just put it in my favorites (Ignore typos)
So, I embarked on a new path of searching for articles...
Really, don't think I talk too much. This is the way I behave when I encounter long and good articles.
Okay, I admit I'm verbose.
Well written! Pack it up and haul it away~~~Come on!
It's funny, every chapter is good~~ I believe the author wrote it very carefully^^ But the writing style can be improved a bit, and many characters have been deformed~~MA, I never give negative marks to the article. It is the fruit of the author's labor, and I can't veto it. I believe the author wrote this article to bring happiness to everyone, so he won't care about it so much^^ SA Xiaocao, keep up the good work~~ support you~~
Su Wen is not guilty, but please pay attention to the lower limit One point was given. This comment has both likes and dislikes, and there is absolutely no malice in it. The following is a Naruto fan for 6+ years. But the age of entering the fandom is only two years. So in the process of constantly looking for articles, I found this article below. Looking through the copy room, first of all, please let me express my utmost respect to the author. After all, the copywriting was only superficial, so I clicked on the article twitchingly. But I'm sorry, because I also owe a lot of mistakes, so I can't finish it. If the heroine is the night spirit, with blue hair and pink eyes, even if I am studying art design, it is difficult to imagine what kind of effect it will be. Two different colors, even if they look beautiful alone, they are a failure as a combination. However, the only person who could think that this was the image of an angel was Naruto at that time. For those of you who have not read this article, I do not dare to comment too much on the plot of the story, but please allow me to make some trivial comments on the author's great writing and words. I will be grateful. I'm just a little scumbag author, so I'm just expressing my opinions. First of all, I don't think Da Da's writing style is very rigorous. Language, phrasing, etc. Are arbitrary and excessive. It may be to make the writing style relaxed, but a relaxed writing style does not mean that you can use overly casual sentences arbitrarily. Personally, I think that the so-called relaxed writing style is also based on a rigorous foundation. After all, too many casual statements are also a kind of irresponsibility, whether to others or to oneself. Then we will talk about what the following topic wants to express. In my opinion, Mary Sue is not a fault. The slightly restrained Su Meizi is actually a subconscious pursuit of the author. It is a manifestation of wanting to be strong, wanting to be perfect, and wanting to be loved by the people you like. There is absolutely nothing wrong with this. In other words, I have unilaterally affirmed Su Wen, because they are the true reflection of the young author's heart. However, the word "comprehensive" must not have been added before. Everything has a lower limit, this is the most basic. In the author's article, the spirit girl has the power to defeat God. I sincerely pray that there are no devout Catholic believers among the people who read this article. Amen. I didn't continue to read it, so I don't know if Sakyamuni and the main god of Tianyu were tamed by Lingmei, I guess not. Even if there is, it doesn't matter. After all, Pluto Tongzi is also despised by Ling Meizi. Besides, Ling Meizi is too arrogant. In summary, Ling Meizi has replaced Master Bei and become a humanoid life form standing at the top of the food chain. ←What's wrong! . In addition, although it is summarized, it does not mean that the nonsense below is over. The following problem seems to be more serious than Mary Sue. The first thing I want to affirm below is your bold idea, the author. It is not derogatory, it is a sincere affirmation. I also refer to the comments of other readers below to get a rough idea of the author's ideas, and I don't find them annoying. But... The character is broken and I can't bear it. While I am a fangirl, I am also a devout Naruto fan. I understand that it is normal for fan authors to experience slight collapse when they are brainstorming. This is nothing, and I understand this deeply. However, the characters under the author's control... At least from what I see below, Kakashi-senpai's biological parents are more like you, the author, than Masashi Kishimoto. Neither is the third-generation grandfather, nor is the gentle fourth-generation. Well, sir, I would like to ask you, sir, why don't you write an original article and instead attack "NARUTO"? Naruto is okay, at least there is no big problem in what I see below. At least in the first few chapters, it is well reflected that Naruto's desire for attention and care as a child, and his excitement when receiving the love and recognition of others, are very good and worthy of praise. I didn't see the back part, but I seemed to have discovered that the Akatsuki organization would appear, so I didn't plan to continue watching, because my favorite was Brother Itachi, and I didn't want to see the strange Brother Itachi "intruding". I'm just an ordinary Naruto fan who is mixed up in the same circle. In addition, at the end, I would like to express a final point of view. I believe that fan fiction is just something that the author imagined as his favorite work, but happened to be accepted by most people. Everyone starts writing articles out of love for the original work, so even if they are just thinking about it, they should also carefully figure out the heart and personality of the original characters. For example, what would this person do when encountering a certain situation? Even if the author's unilateral thoughts are brought in, at least it must be ensured that Kakashi is still Kakashi, the third generation is still the third generation, and the fourth generation Minato is still the gentle and great man. Otherwise, they wouldn't be them anymore, so would they still be considered colleagues? Hmm... I only know this much. If there is something wrong, please come back and I will accept it all!
It's 2020 and I'm here again to review the tricks I did in elementary school! ! The author of Crab Crab has brought me into the pit of Internet King. After the new network game national server was launched, I suddenly remembered this article and came to do some archaeology——
Emmmmm, what can I say? This article is my entry into the fandom. It is not just a Naruto fandom. I remember it was three or four years ago, on the right side of that webpage. At that time, I remember that I just wanted to watch Naruto anime, but accidentally clicked on this article. I remember reading it with gusto, and felt that this was the most interesting article I had ever read. Now it looks so pure and cute when I look at my childhood:)
I rub yuanfeinuoxyuan, isn't it the name of nuoxyuan pill?
The new pit is not bad, but a bit shocking [I have finished watching it]
After reading this article! It's a very relaxing article! I just want to say something: Dad, you are so talented! Xiao Fu brings "I am the Scorpion of Red Sand" and "Naruto: Chiyuki Legend" to advertise! Talk about not being a bully or a diver!
I left a comment and said that I found this article in Paipai Novels. After finishing it, I came directly to Jinjiang. I said that I love complaining about Honkai Impact. Come on, the author! Yes, I will collect it in BG.
It's pretty good, but it just feels "unexpected"... It feels like it's just fun, no plot... Is this article funny? Why did I just know about it? Well, actually, I was just looking for articles about male pigs and Madara... To be honest, I don't really like this kind of prank, it's a bit gratuitous, isn't it? By the way, it is indeed a god-like existence, although it is not a god... Although I don't like female pigs too much... But there are too few articles about Madara... But to be honest, this article, although it is very EG, is not my favorite type (how old are you when you are looking for a boyfriend?), But this article is very good, really, after all, it is my first time to read this type of article patiently, not to mention it has more than a hundred chapters. So this article is just for my entertainment. Well, I haven't read it yet, but I'll just put it in my favorites (Ignore typos) So, I embarked on a new path of searching for articles... Really, don't think I talk too much. This is the way I behave when I encounter long and good articles. Okay, I admit I'm verbose.
Well written! Pack it up and haul it away~~~Come on!
It's funny, every chapter is good~~ I believe the author wrote it very carefully^^ But the writing style can be improved a bit, and many characters have been deformed~~MA, I never give negative marks to the article. It is the fruit of the author's labor, and I can't veto it. I believe the author wrote this article to bring happiness to everyone, so he won't care about it so much^^ SA Xiaocao, keep up the good work~~ support you~~