[Interstellar] After Our Breakup, I Started Farming in Enemy Territory

Why was the visa application not approved? What's the problem? So many articles with outrageous logic, poor content, poor writing and incorrect views have all been approved. What is wrong with this article and it cannot apply for a visa?

Frankly speaking, I don't think there's anything wrong with the text itself. But maybe JJ thinks the pace is slow? Or is the main line unclear? Anyway, I think this is a good article, and it is very comfortable to read. Farming is not something you can do quickly. It is a pity that this article ends so quickly. In fact, I really want to see what kind of new interstellar world there will be with abundant grains and livestock. I look forward to reading a good article about farming in the next one! Thank you so much to the author, it's not easy to write the article!

Congratulations on the completion. The author's writing style really suits my taste. Although there are some loopholes in the article, overall this article is really good (I think so). Looking forward to new articles~

I have been reading articles for more than ten years, and I think this article is okay. It may have a few words, but the author's writing style and imagination are very good.

It felt a little rushed, but it felt like it was the right time to end it here.

Although the first batch of people to find a livable planet created protective shields for human life, those who died without protective shields were those without mental power. People with mental powers had short lifespans and did not die immediately. Calculating the consumption of life force extraction, these people should have to be great for the future of mankind, endure the short life span, step out of the protective shield, and give life to young children.

Congratulations on the completion Reading along the way, the overall description of the story is still very smooth. I think the biggest problem lies in the golden finger of the heroine. She brought out too many unreasonable things in a high-profile manner but no one asked about the source. If everyone is rationalizing it based on the mental power of the hero's father at the end, there is too little foreshadowing of the mental power in the early part of the story. Thank you for your hard work in finishing the game without giving up. I hope the author will write better and better~

The author's writing skills and ideas are quite good, and the story structure could be richer if carefully conceived. Looking forward to more works

Woooooooooooo well written

It's a really good interstellar farming article. I'll feel weird when reading other interstellar farming articles in the future. This article is very logical.