Limit: 500 characters. A spirited, adorable, clever, and kind country girl raised in the mountains enters a prince's residence because her family is poor. With her sincerity and determination, she begins a legendary romance with its master.
I am from Bishui. Like you, I have just written more than 10,000 words in my article. Well, come on, come on, everyone is lacking in writing skills. My article is called The Bow of Hunting. I will discuss it if I have a chance
It is also best to leave a blank line after each paragraph, which looks a bit tiring.
Hey, what should I say? It made me dizzy. Can the author distance each line of the paragraph? ···
Not my type though. But, I never shoot bricks!
Since you are posting in BS, I am kind enough to come and smash your bricks...
Condensed version: too tender
Specific version: I couldn't stand it after reading the first paragraph... I can't comment on the rest, just speak your language.
Question 1: There is no distinction between those who get the land. This will make people think that you lack basic literary literacy. "Happily playing in the clear river" "Dancing happily in the air"
Question 2, lack of words. There are actually three joys in a short paragraph! Moreover, can the water droplets hanging on the face be described as cheerful?
3. Wordy.
If LZ is still young, it doesn't matter, it's normal. Don't write a long article first, and practice the basic language skills before starting. It doesn't mean that when writing a novel, you must first have a beautiful and unique writing style. At least it must be readable, right?
Well written, keep up the good work and look forward to updates
I am from Bishui. Like you, I have just written more than 10,000 words in my article. Well, come on, come on, everyone is lacking in writing skills. My article is called The Bow of Hunting. I will discuss it if I have a chance It is also best to leave a blank line after each paragraph, which looks a bit tiring.
Hey, what should I say? It made me dizzy. Can the author distance each line of the paragraph? ··· Not my type though. But, I never shoot bricks!
Since you are posting in BS, I am kind enough to come and smash your bricks... Condensed version: too tender Specific version: I couldn't stand it after reading the first paragraph... I can't comment on the rest, just speak your language. Question 1: There is no distinction between those who get the land. This will make people think that you lack basic literary literacy. "Happily playing in the clear river" "Dancing happily in the air" Question 2, lack of words. There are actually three joys in a short paragraph! Moreover, can the water droplets hanging on the face be described as cheerful? 3. Wordy. If LZ is still young, it doesn't matter, it's normal. Don't write a long article first, and practice the basic language skills before starting. It doesn't mean that when writing a novel, you must first have a beautiful and unique writing style. At least it must be readable, right?
Well written, keep up the good work and look forward to updates