(A few rambling thoughts) This story contains some melodramatic Mary Sue elements. It is not a wish-fulfillment story, and the writing is that of a student. There are lots of personal headcanons, so please be warned.
The heroine's intelligence goes up and down, the pacing speeds up and slows down, and the logic is sometimes normal and sometimes bizarre. This is a spur-of-the-moment writing exercise. If you can't stand it, leave via the top-left corner.
Synopsis:
Stare into the abyss long enough, and the abyss will stare back at you.
“My life hasn't exactly been free of guilt. I've schemed and I've been hurt, but luckily, you were there to grow up with me.”
Viola Shafiq
“My surname has given me unparalleled glory. Maybe only in front of you am I Draco, and not Draco Malfoy.”
Draco Malfoy
To wear the crown, you must bear its weight. Our noble families are our honor and glory, but also the heaviest shackles we carry.
In the darkness, we can only walk against the light.
Draco pairing. The heroine is in Ravenclaw, and the story follows the original books. This is my first time writing, so please don't flame me if it's not to your taste.
The story includes personal headcanons (in this version, Cho Chang is in the same year as Harry and the heroine).
Theme: We keep struggling forward, like boats rowing upstream, only to be pushed back ceaselessly until we return to the years gone by., F. Scott Fitzgerald, The Great Gatsby
I'm here to write a book review! Although the writing style of this article is a bit immature, it is overall okay. The pace of the plot is relatively fast, so it doesn't feel too lengthy when reading. As the first novel written by a student party wife, the quality is still acceptable. But let me also say something. I personally feel that the biggest problem with this article is that some settings feel superfluous: For example, Qiu's grade was changed to the same year as the heroine and Harry. The author said it was to better develop the Seder line. However, from the plot point of view, Seid is still gone, and Qiu, as the heroine's friend, does not have a particularly great impact on the heroine; Another example is that Snape is mentioned as Draco's godfather, but it is only mentioned in one sentence in the article. This godfather identity setting is of little use, so I feel it is better not to mention it. After all, "godfather" is not an official setting. Other words are that the heroine is a bit strong, as Dumbledore's successor to guide Harry, but it is acceptable~ Finally, I hope my wife can bring us more good-looking works! Love you
Self-destructive love, I feel that the style of love in Snake Hospital is different from other hospitals. The comparison is really tragic.
In fact, I don't quite understand why we need to develop the Seqiu line and change the grades of Qiu. At first, I thought I would save Said, so the Seqiu line was going to develop, so I had to change the grade of Qiu. But seeing this, Seid is still dead, so there is no need to change Qiu's grade. It will have no impact on the main plot... Qiu, as the heroine's friend, does not play a big role in the development of the entire story. He can be replaced by any other character.
Times make those people. I don't hate the people in the book (even Voldemort), I don't hate Slytherin, I don't hate Gryffindor, stance determines everything. Everyone has their story, and their experiences have made them what they are now. The acquired environment is absolutely indispensable for a person's growth. There are always regrets, but it is precisely because of those shortcomings that make those lifelike people (￣?￣)
Oh my god, the writing is so good, I just took the high school entrance examination! Very talented
I read it in one night and it was quite good. At first I thought the heroine's character was very strange, smart and stupid, superior and friendly, but then I felt relieved. The writing may be a bit immature, but it is quite real. A person's personality itself is contradictory, which gives Viola Shafik the soul, a unique Viola Shafik.
The writing is quite good, except that the writing style is a bit immature and the content is pretty good. The reason why Harry Potter is so memorable is related to its tragic character creation. Fans can certainly achieve the beautiful reunion in their minds, but sometimes, the incomplete beauty of tragedy is the most profound. If Sect and Lily were reunited, Sirius survived, and ggad lived in seclusion after the war... These are good, but will they really make us remember them so deeply? Everything is Merlin's best arrangement
Please let the female supporting actor go offline. I feel so uncomfortable when I see her wiping tears here during a tense moment.
Damn it, hurry up and get to Dabo!
Isn't Qiu Zhang one year older than them?