Also titled My Heart's Promise, My Childhood Friend's Girlfriend Is My Moonlight, and After Getting Together with My Moonlight
Blurb: Many years ago, a transfer student arrived at Yunjiang No. 1 High School. Rumor had it that she was stunningly beautiful, elegant, and mysterious. That day, the railing by the teaching building was packed with people hoping to catch a glimpse of her. As luck would have it, the taciturn Xu Wangchuan saw her from afar for just a fleeting moment, and lost the rest of her life to her.
Xu Wangchuan, who had long been at the top of the school's list of students in need of financial aid, had never imagined that light might descend and illuminate her bleak life. To her, Shen Nianyi was a light she could see but never reach, close at hand yet as far away as the Milky Way.
She had always held to the principle that a friend's wife was off limits, until one day, beneath the hazy moonlight and with alcohol going to her head, her moonlight took the initiative and asked if she wanted her...
From the moment she was born, Shen Nianyi was the quintessential novel heroine: talented and beautiful, from a wealthy family, and never acquainted with life's hardships. Later, she met a girl whose short-sleeved shirt had been washed yellow. The girl was taciturn and solitary, yet had ranked first in her grade for years and was a legend at No. 1 High School. At the time, Shen Nianyi never imagined they would have anything to do with each other.
Years later, beneath the hazy night sky, Shen Nianyi, her eyes reddened from being thoroughly worked over, bit the other woman hard. The woman then leisurely took off that yellowed short-sleeved shirt and continued to tease her.
Nianyi was originally named for the meaning of "A promise held close in one's heart, a smile that captivates the city." She never expected it had long since foretold the bond between them...
A story about an honest person quietly stealing someone else's girl.
Taciturn, aloof top student x pampered, spoiled young lady
Note: The moonlight had a crush on the heroine's friend before gradually falling for the heroine.
Theme: A girl bound by fate keeps striving through her own efforts and ultimately achieves her dream.
I always have the feeling that the article is very divided. The front and back are written in two different styles.
First of all, I would like to congratulate my wife for completing this work. Here is some personal feedback after reading: adding the amnesia in a car accident before the amnesia in a car accident makes the whole article a relatively interesting article, but adding the amnesia in a car accident makes the whole story cheesy. The amnesia in a car accident is very abrupt and does not advance or change the relationship in any way. There is no advancement or change in the plot. This kind of useless plot will only make the entire article rotten. Full subscription is just an obsessive-compulsive disorder that cannot accept half-finished work. I will probably not subscribe to this wife's other books in the future, because the writing behavior I hate most is designing useless plots to forcefully change the overall rhythm of the article. There are also comments in the comments about "you can do it" and "you are on the fandom" will only make an author rest on his own laurels and make a communication environment diode. Readers and audiences of cultural and entertainment works have 100% right to criticize.
After so much abuse in the past, I'm just waiting for the sweet moment when they are together. I want to see Nian Nian treat Wang Chuan as tenderly as Jian Zhou. But I feel that there are very few plots like this. There are only a little bit after Fang reappears and before Wang Chuan's accident. Also, I feel that the plot of Nian Nian suddenly going abroad to accompany Wang Chuan is a bit abrupt. Aren't they all prepared for her to have a better life? I think Nian Nian's heartbeat activities during this period can be described more richly. After going abroad, many places were written in a hurry. I feel like the article could be more substantial, but the author has done a good job and the writing style is also good. I really love the spare plots in the front!
It's not as bad as the comments say
I always have the feeling that the article is very divided. The front and back are written in two different styles.
What a shit. Actually, it's not bad.
Finished spreading flowers! Overall, it's pretty good. The only drawback is that Xu went abroad in the middle, and the place where Nian Nian chased her was a bit abrupt and the writing was too brief. Maybe more of Nian Nian's psychological activities could be written. But it's still very cool!
The plot settings are still relatively novel, and many of them just skip the predecessor. I felt like the plot could have gone a little deeper, and it felt like it was almost getting there, but then the direction of the plot suddenly changed. The heroine's secret love could be written more deeply. Of course, there are some horse-catching plots. .
The ending of "Spreading Flowers" ~ I had a lot of fun watching it. My aunt laughed throughout the whole process. I think the character Wang Chuan was well written! Happy creating!
Although it's a bit bloody, it's still pretty good-looking