Love at First Sight

After reading the full text, the author's writing style is very mature and very organized from beginning to end. However, there are some typos in several chapters. If the author has time, he can review it. The novel is not a typical novel focusing on e-sports, but uses the characters' occupations and images to attract readers. Readers like me really like it. However, there are too few chapters, which is different from other novels on the market, so some readers may feel that the love between the protagonists comes a bit suddenly, and there is no emphasis on the description. If the author wants to make revisions in the future, he can start from here. I think that the author did not describe the character personally enough, making the image not full enough and the personality not very clear and obvious. But the novel is still a good novel and has the author's writing characteristics. The above are just some of my humble words, I hope they can provide some reference to the author. Thank you and I wish you all the best in the future.

Secret love for each other is the worst thing!

The second brush is completed, over

The second brush is completed, over

This editor is so disgusting. . How bad does it have to be to have such bad intentions towards others?

It's beautiful, but why are there so few people watching it? And there are so few people watching that we can still sign a contract.