
Even If I Become a Daughter of the Night, I Still Want to Live to a Hundred
就算变成夜之爱女也要长命百岁
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 107k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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45Chapters
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Honey it's been a year
Are you still revising the article? Is this article still updated? (Piece_piece)(*'へ'*)
Will my wife update it again? QAQ
Wait(?ì _ í?)
How about Dawuxia Sandwich?
Why hasn't it been updated yet?
Grass, is it actually used for love? I can't tell at all. At present, it feels like Feiniao is following a personal path and has very little interaction with other people. For example, a single player in an online game will only temporarily form a group with others when something happens, and then they will break up and continue doing their own things. It's okay if there is no CP, but if there is a love line... At least find a way to increase the chances of other characters appearing, their roles, and their outstanding performances. If you don't even get along, it's even harder to talk about feelings. And because it is the first person, the plot is narrated entirely from the protagonist's perspective, inner monologue, etc. This is also one of the reasons that indirectly reduces the presence of other characters. The readers are pulled into the perspective of the play, unable to take a bird's-eye view, and their vision becomes narrow. They lack understanding of the characters other than the protagonist, what they are doing, what role they play, and what they think about the current situation. These are poorly sketched, so there is insufficient information. It is easy for the first person to suffer from such shortcomings. You can try to write some supplementary descriptions that change the perspective, or add instructions for the protagonist to "watch" when narrating. The person who is talking to the protagonist, his subtle expressions, pronunciation, movements, etc. When he speaks. Not only does it add more scenes, but also because it is what the protagonist sees and thinks, so this description does not feel ambiguous. (Personally confused
Will the male protagonist be 5t5?
Brain busting!!!!!!!!! Ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah what am I saying?
I'm a little confused: How did Angelica know the identity of the heroine, Night's Lover? Normally she wouldn't tell others casually. There is no way to tell. If Angelica hadn't kindly asked Chise to try using magic during the conversation in the magic marriage, but she accidentally lost control, Elias told Angelika Chise's physique, otherwise she wouldn't know.