The man she dates is not the one she loves, the one who makes her heart flutter is already engaged, the man who loves her dies unexpectedly, and even those who love each other deeply and are destined to meet cannot escape the twists and turns of love. A bar shrouded in hazy lamplight, a riverside glittering in the dark, a hilltop church veiled in green, melancholy Moscow, beautiful yet lonely Shanghai... A group of young people, each with a different temperament and past, live through a turbulent romance in their youth.
New for 2023: Tonight, You Are About to Leave, about a disabled painter's toxic childhood sweetheart
Theme: Breaking free from confusion
I couldn't help but jump directly to the last chapter to read the entire ending. I'm sorry for this disrespectful behavior towards the author. I clearly knew that this was my first book many years ago, but it felt too heavy when I read it.
I finally spent a few days reading this old article I accidentally discovered four years ago. There were no flowers or grades along the way, just reading quietly. I just finished watching the ending today, so I have a few words to say. I really like this very sincere creation, and it is your first novel. I think the writing skills, plot layout, protagonist's personality, etc. Are all very specific and I feel very good. I won't write a review, I just want to write a few words of encouragement. I hope you will continue to work hard, continue to create, and don't waste your storytelling talents. I'd love to follow up on your new work if I get the chance. Give flowers!
I especially look for the finished article to read, no matter the time. I guess the author won't care about this little comment about the film. But it's great to be able to write like this for the first time. I like the writing and style of this article. Will keep an eye out for other works.
7.5 Points (out of 10 points) Nice article. The author has a good grasp of the structure of the article. The plot follows one after another, and the pace is neither too slow to make people fall asleep, nor too fast to make people overwhelmed. A little bit bourgeois, but this is not a shortcoming at all, but a style. The grasp of the character's personality is also good. I can't say that the characters are all distinct, but they are not the same. For example, Ji Yuan appears to be courteous and courteous, but is actually selfish and irritable, and the heroine's pride, etc., All show that the author actually put in some effort. Unfortunately, this article is not my cup of tea. This article has been added to V
It's very well written, but unfortunately I don't have enough points to finish it.
I read the whole article, and I can understand what happened here, but I can't forgive it. Even though I'm experienced or something, once something like this happens, it doesn't mean it won't happen in the future. If he and Su have a quarrel in the future, will other people do the same thing when they drink? Can he also be considered drunk? Some people may say that, but that's definitely not the case. Same, now he is desperate and feels that he can't be with Su, so he will let it happen, but if they get together in the future, it won't happen. The Haochen I saw before was kind and clear, but I can't deny that just because this happened, all his previous efforts have been wiped away, but it is always a stain. I don't know if it will happen again in the future. I know that Shen forgave him in the end. She also knew that people may not be completely perfect. Maybe this is really the bad nature of people. It also shows that men can sometimes separate their upper body and lower body... In fact, it is legal for them to happen. After all, they are husband and wife, right? But he loves her so much, but he can't compete with lust. This is what makes me sad, such a beautiful person, such a beautiful story, something like this will happen... That's why so many men will say, I love you, she is just... In reality, there are no very pure feelings. Maybe you can see it in this article, but in the end there is still a slight stain... Maybe this is reality...
(Sigh) You are all so awesome. Fly by
:) It's so big, I've finished reading it, (*^__^*) Hehe...
I was so embarrassed that I kept saying that I would come back and leave a few words, but unfortunately there were constant trivial matters around me and the writing at hand was not going well, so it has been postponed until today. . . Don't be surprised if you listen to the rain. . . I thought for a long time in front of the screen, thinking about what to say, but I didn't know where to say it. I can only talk about my feelings~ It's a happy ending after all~ It doesn't have the almost fairy tale ending in the eight o'clock TV series, nor the sadness of meeting strangers. Xiaochen's pain, Shensu's return, Bingyan's desolation All turned into a simple sentence, I wait for you, which is the deadline and the limit of love. No more words are needed, these few sentences are so clean and pure, and leave too much room for imagination. It can be seen that the personal transformation in the third volume is successful, and the description of the two armies is also an excellent idea. However, to be honest, the rhythm of the writing at the end is a little more relaxed, and when I read it, I felt like a knife was cutting into my heart. . It happened that the blood could not be drained out in half a day. . . Haha, of course, Tingyu can also regard Ryo's words as praise, because not all words can make Ryo feel his heart bleed~ It was a coincidence that Liang saw this article, but it was inevitable that Liang fell in love with Tingyu's style of writing~ Another hug for Tingyu, looking forward to your new writing~
When I saw the ending, I just felt so warm Tingyu has finally concluded, it's very heartwarming and touching! Come on!