Tea-White Hair, Ink-Washed Eyes [Naruto Fanfic]

Maybe you will think of me after reading this name. Maybe I can't remember. But no matter how you say it, if you can finish writing it, first of all, congratulations to you. Then, W, I sincerely want to give you a -2 without mercy at the end. I have been reading this article on and off for several years, and of course you have been writing on and off for several years. Although I have seen other negative points, I can understand that you are not a native speaker of Chinese. Even if it is your own fault many times, I have already gotten used to it after watching it for so long. But putting aside the use of language and the obscurity of the words, I have to say, W, you let me down so much. I still remember the time when I was watching the Chunin Examination, the time when the Nine-Tails Seal was about the sealing of the Nine-Tails, and how shocked I was when Yunsheng's arm was chopped off. The battle scenes written by W were always majestic, as if the readers were standing on the field with the characters, swinging their swords to kill the enemy. Whether Cangmu Yunyun is born or Sarutobi Yunyun is born, that child never does anything, breaks or stands, never smiles, never speaks, never bothers, Shi Shiran stands in front of the enemy, and with a wave of his hand, he has a three-point chance of winning. Whether she is indifferent or greedy for money, and she has always been lukewarm or close to Kakashi, she has always made it clear that she is a good child who is serious about living. Maybe I still have even a little bit of extravagant expectations for romantic dramas, so I just watched her grow up, and then I had nothing to do and figured out when this pair would sprout and bear fruit. But you told me that this article is over. I couldn't wait to run and read. Yunsheng regained his memory. Orochimaru died when he said he was going to die. The bad friends who had known each other since childhood also fell at his feet. Kakashi failed to keep her. The conversation with his biological father's stream of consciousness made it unclear whether he was killed or not. Yunsheng suddenly came up with a "forced" theory in the penultimate chapter. In summary, the last few chapters were so superficial and scrawled that I can't even imagine what kind of setbacks this article encountered before it suddenly ended. But as a writer, I know that Yunsheng has not changed, but you have. It's like I've changed too. Because you have changed, become impatient, and may not have the strength to write anymore, this is a bad work in the standard sense. I thought it would never appear in a person like you who has the patience to write for many years, but it ended up being like this in the end. Precisely because I feel that a person who has been patiently writing for several years will not end it hastily, this result now disappoints me. If you can't even make it to the end, then what have you put in in the past few years? Furthermore, Yun gave birth to this child. After reading about her for many years, I never felt that she was forced to do anything. If so, I would definitely feel sorry for this person - but since there is no such thing, it means that the explanation of certain facts is still slightly insufficient. The so-called forced means being asked to do something she doesn't want to do, and Yunsheng is naturally indifferent, and she has never resisted anything. If you say that she has been smoothed out and become obedient, it proves that Yunsheng is really unwilling in her heart. Since this is the case, and this is the fact, why didn't you give Yunsheng even an unwilling psychological description when everything came to an end? There is no such psychological description, and now it is too hindsight to say that everything was forced on her. In the movie version of "The Devil Wears Prada", Miranda said mercilessly to Andy that you were not forced to replace Emily. No one forced you to replace her and come to France to participate in the fashion week of her dreams. It was you who made your own choice to abandon Emily in order to keep your job and climb up. There is nothing forced in this world, and no one puts a knife on Yunsheng's neck to ask her to become the granddaughter of Hiruzen Sarutobi or to enter the ninja school. All the causes and conditions are all caused by her own hands. There is a bad word in Chinese for Yunsheng's character. To say it is bad is to be pretentious. This character is difficult to describe. W had mastered it very well before, so he had never felt this way before. Today, because of that forced sentence, I suddenly felt sick. Again, if the existence of this Yunsheng is what you want, then the problem is that you yourself have not restored her completely. W, time has passed by, and there must be some differences between you now and you when you first started writing. So the Yunsheng you want may never come back. By the way, the so-called last chapter is the most interesting chapter in the whole article, which is really a slap in the face. At the end of the full text, I just felt that the author was lazy and how could it be so exciting.

Finished... Almost finished... Should I scatter flowers or cry bitterly? I watched it for a long time... Ah... Ah... Ah... Fell to the ground speechlessly... Sophisticated personality Ignore her as a bastard. Congratulations on your new articles. Come on.

Oh yeah~~~I finally followed~~ I'm still a little sad about Uncle Snake's past... I always feel like I had a relationship with Kakashi's father = = Yunsheng has become a stranger here - - Uncle Snake has received the lunch box. . . .

It's been two months. . . The spaceships are in the sky. . . The Singles' Day of the century has passed. . . .

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Come on, what about the male protagonist?????

JQ? Is it JQ? And I like the unity and harmony of the world [Friends] There is a loving middle-aged rabbit named Madara???? The male protagonist should be Kakashi, after all, he was sent to the card bar. Ahhhhhhh, but, [A Fei] is still very cute, [firm expression orz Because I suddenly found out that there was an update [in shock], I was so surprised that I didn't know what to say, and I came to see Xiao Sa every day to see if there was an update.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa tasks by W Jun is so wet that my eyes are dazzled = =||| The words are this article. . . It's been a long time since I wrote it= =|||

Author, you are still updating... That's great. By the way... Actually, I really hope it's Ka Yun's CP... Come on~

Yes, there is progress. . . Come on