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[Cool, aloof rival A x little white flower O], The Rival's Self-Conquest
After she transmigrated into a book, Yu Mian could tell from the first day that something was off about her rival, Lin Zhi.
Yu Mian was working so hard to bully her, but somehow the other girl didn't seem bullied at all. In fact, she seemed... kind of into it.
First plot point
After hesitating for ages, Yu Mian finally tossed a handkerchief at her rival. She wondered if the usually cold and aloof girl would get really angry!
But when Yu Mian glanced over, she saw that the other girl wasn't angry at all. The emotions in her eyes were inscrutable. And for nearly every day afterward, Yu Mian could smell her own pheromones on her rival.
Yu Mian quietly asked the System: Is this revenge?
Next plot point
Her rival was forced to take a knife for her. While applying medicine to the wound, Yu Mian deliberately dawdled, hoping to make her hurt a little longer. Then she looked up at her rival.
The other girl regarded her calmly, and she... she wasn't even in pain.
Yu Mian: I don't believe it. She's pretending!
Another day of trying her best to bully her rival!
*
After Lin Zhi received the handkerchief Yu Mian had given her on a rainy day, she took it home that night and kept it beside her pillow, breathing in its gardenia scent all night. The other girl's fragrance filled her nose.
The little white flower was soft, pure, and spotless in Lin Zhi's dreams.
Her wound didn't hurt, but Yu Mian was still afraid she might be in pain. She gently applied the medicine, brows furrowed as she looked up at Lin Zhi with concern.
Lin Zhi liked this little white flower so much.
*
After realizing she'd mistaken the target of her mission, Yu Mian was so frightened whenever she saw Lin Zhi that she wanted to run.
After she'd run away a few times, Lin Zhi finally caught her waiting in ambush.
The streetlights cast a dim glow, and Lin Zhi's eyes were full of warmth.
“I don't have anything else to say. I just want you to stop smiling so seductively.”
“Mianmian, it doesn't matter how seductive you are now. I'm taking this little white flower home and planting her there.”
Please add my new novel, “Today, A Pretends to Be O and Gets Exposed” to your collection!
Xu Jin was bound to a System while going out to meet someone. By accident, the top alpha became an O with pheromones running wild.
In a panic, Xu Jin tried to suppress her errant pheromones and leave, only to run straight into Wen Sheng, the person she was supposed to fight that night.
Fortunately, Wen Sheng had never seen her before and assumed she was just an omega who'd wandered into the wrong place. Xu Jin's breath caught. She swore she'd make Wen Sheng pay for mistaking her for an O.
Before she could get her revenge, however, her first heat arrived. Experiencing an omega's heat for the first time, she was extremely uneasy. She hid in the storeroom, flushed and struggling to keep herself in check.
As a cool pheromone drew near, Xu Jin felt warmth and breath against her neck.
“I'll help you.”
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Wen Sheng had always thought her girlfriend, Xu Jin, was a gentle, sweet, well-behaved, and kind O. Whenever danger came, she would obediently hide behind Wen Sheng and say she was scared.
Until one day, in a hidden spot beneath the streetlights, Wen Sheng saw an alpha everyone called Sister Jin. The alpha swiftly subdued a group of thugs, then gave them a cold warning: “Stay away from my partner.”
That alpha looked familiar. Her features were gentle, and she'd just been clinging to Wen Sheng and calling her “big sister.” She was even wearing Wen Sheng's school uniform.
So... was her girlfriend an A pretending to be an O?
Tips: Female alphas have normal female bodies.
Xu Jin will turn back into an A. This is a bottom-led romance, so there are no role-reversal or switch scenes.
Theme: Don't give up when facing difficulties
So in the end Mianmian and Lin Zhizheng got married and had children, right?
Today, when I was bored and waiting for the update, I came across this article again. I finished it a few days ago. I haven't summarized the article for a long time, so I might as well write a comment.
After reading the author's column, the previous article was also a campus abo. Comparing the number of words in this article, it can be seen that the number of words in this article has decreased by tens of thousands. Maybe the subject matter is too similar, so there is not much inspiration. Through books, campuses, systems, and abo, I wonder if this is the author's comfort zone, and the next book seems to be the same. For readers (here I mean me), if they didn't follow the previous article, they most likely won't follow this one. The two articles are too similar, so readers who have read the first article may not read this one again. By comparing the number of collections of the two articles, it can be concluded (there may be collections of the completed article, but there is a gap between 2000 and 5000...). I didn't fully subscribe to the previous article "Green Tea" (I just didn't read it). The reason is actually very simple. The author lacks the main line.
For a novel, it is terrible to have no main line. This will cause readers to lack the passion to read. Especially in this kind of Jinjiang fast-food article, many times I can't remember the name of the protagonist and it ends. (The names of the author's articles are too similar, and it is easy to get confused. I don't know why these two surnames must be used. It may be a little concern of the author. ? But in fact, it is the same for readers, and it is easy for the author to mix up the name in another book, which will cause confusion for many new readers) Even if the article is impressive, the enthusiasm will disappear after a few weeks and months. How to make readers continue to follow the article and look forward to the author's updates is the "wealth password" that the author must master.
I thought back to the reason why I fattened up and discarded articles - it was because the articles did not have an event line that really attracted me, and I felt that it was a pity to discard them because they were tasteless. This resulted in many of the articles I collected actually just piled there, growing mold in the dark, with no chance to be seen again.
Campus writing has its own limitations, with a small audience and little passion (no plots such as appointments, promises, falling out of horses, etc.), And its main line will be weakened, or even have no strict main line. After all, students' days and nights consist of going to class, finishing get out of class, doing homework, and going to class, and then they actually have to fall in love under such circumstances! You also have to avoid being discovered by teachers and parents! It's still such a secret and humble emotion! They actually asked the author to write hundreds of thousands of words! And readers like it! This is so difficult, not even men have it this hard! (Sorry for being off topic haha)
This also basically determines the character design, a top student These are most of the characters. The character set by the author is also among them (the academic group), and they come from a wealthy family with busy parents, so the two of them keep warm. If you want to break this shackles, you must get rid of your love for capital.
The author wrote that the heroine (I have forgotten her name...) Has a very talented family, and the heroine can also trade stocks, blah blah blah. In terms of perception, I actually don't have the idea that the heroine is awesome. After all, the heroine still relies on her family. Without her family, high school students would not have the funds to speculate in stocks. This actually gave me a warning - although everyone scorns capital, they still long for the kind of superiority that looks down on all living beings, which also produces cool articles. However, this does not mean that the author's setting is not good, because too many people use this routine.
In fact, I still hope that the author will make progress. After all, writing articles consumes the author's time and energy. He is thinking about inspiration every day. After a long time, this will be a painful thing, especially if there is no progress and encouragement.
When typing these words, I thought of several inspirations. 1) If it is a campus article about secret love, it should be written in a more detailed and serious way, and some people might watch it; 2) Abo, there are many people writing about it now, which will lead to a saturated market. There are also many people who are not interested in Abo, so Abo has sunk. I don't know if the author wants to write about AO equality (it feels like there shouldn't be), but most of the authors write very plainly, which makes me want to give up immediately, because it feels like they are forcibly elevating the idea of the article. I have seen the copywriting of alpha and beta, and it felt very strange at that time. It is obvious that beta is not worthy of alpha, so I understand how deep-rooted this idea is in my mind, and I understand that it is ridiculous to talk about AO equality without beta. I would like to see the relationship between the two betas, which is the humbleness of ordinary people in the context of the times... But in my opinion, the author still seems to like sweet stories? In fact, I also like it, but the author can add some real obstacles to the sweetness, because the cruelty of this article makes me feel that the author forcibly prevents the two from being together, and the system has no sense of existence. Since we are talking about the system, let's put down one. 3) The existence of the system can be borne by another person. For example, let A bring the system. Let us look at it from another angle and see how sentimental the existence of the system is, making people unable to say love... Then the world is broken. In fact, I did not feel it in the article.
The emotion in this article feels so strange? I didn't feel it. In fact, I could write that Girl 1 made a certain move that made Girl 2 fall into a trance, and then remembered it, and the relationship deepened (it's very cliché, so I don't know how to do it).
Sigh... I have been writing for an hour. In fact, the writing is very messy, and I don't want to check it again. In fact, my intention is to encourage the author, not to criticize the article. If I don't really want the author to improve, why would I waste so much time writing comments for the article? I hope the author will stick to it. You can write anything, just follow your heart. Writing an article itself means that the "leftover" is king. I don't know if it will hit the author. I actually didn't criticize the author. Don't get me wrong. This is my first time writing a long review. I don't know how to write it... I wonder if it will block the author's comment area... Ouch... Kneel down.
The following are all offensive remarks. If the author doesn't like it, don't read it [eating melon]
The ending is so bad that I don't know if everyone likes being the kind of person who hangs on others in reality, but this book really made me angry. Yu didn't show his love for Lin until the end, and wrote Lin like a humble licking gou. All this was attributed to Yu's slowness, but this level can no longer be called slow, it can be said to be chun, and he has never given it to me. After a clear reply from the other party, one party has always doted on the other party infinitely. I don't think they can be happy if they continue like this. Yu feels more guilty towards Lin and does not give the other a sense of security. She is not worthy of Lin's love at all. This kind of relationship is not as good as being. Lin deserves a better omega. In the end, I wrote a side story about Song to perfunctory readers, right? [Eat melon]
Little snakes also have love, hahaha, laugh to death
Why don't Xiao Song and the system form a CP, and the two singles can save each other (the dog's head saves his life, haha)
The case has been solved, Lin Zhi likes to be a cowardly omega
I was just about to suggest that the author write about Yu Chu's story, but then I found out that I had already written it. Now I have to fill in the stories about the two of them?
I am also waiting for the new article qaq today
@_@When will you update the article? I've been waiting for it to wither.
I don't know what to say today. Just wish the author a Happy New Year in advance!
I still don't know what Buddhist scriptures are about
The Master of Metaphysics Became Famous After Performing Well in a Variety Show
Extra
You Are a Genius, What Am I?
Do You Believe That I Am Really Not the Savior?
The Villain's Mother Has Arrived
Going on a Variety Show with My Top-Tier Star Brother Made Me Famous
After the White Moonlight Abandons the Villain [Quick Transmigration]
Going Viral on a Variety Show With My Top-Tier Star Brother
The Beloved Little One Goes Viral on a Siblings Variety Show
I Became a Wealthy Family's Stepmom and Went Viral on a Parenting Variety Show
After Reincarnating as the Villain, I Pretended to Be Blind to Win His Heart
Playing the Supporting Female Lead in a Love Triangle
So in the end Mianmian and Lin Zhizheng got married and had children, right?
Today, when I was bored and waiting for the update, I came across this article again. I finished it a few days ago. I haven't summarized the article for a long time, so I might as well write a comment. After reading the author's column, the previous article was also a campus abo. Comparing the number of words in this article, it can be seen that the number of words in this article has decreased by tens of thousands. Maybe the subject matter is too similar, so there is not much inspiration. Through books, campuses, systems, and abo, I wonder if this is the author's comfort zone, and the next book seems to be the same. For readers (here I mean me), if they didn't follow the previous article, they most likely won't follow this one. The two articles are too similar, so readers who have read the first article may not read this one again. By comparing the number of collections of the two articles, it can be concluded (there may be collections of the completed article, but there is a gap between 2000 and 5000...). I didn't fully subscribe to the previous article "Green Tea" (I just didn't read it). The reason is actually very simple. The author lacks the main line. For a novel, it is terrible to have no main line. This will cause readers to lack the passion to read. Especially in this kind of Jinjiang fast-food article, many times I can't remember the name of the protagonist and it ends. (The names of the author's articles are too similar, and it is easy to get confused. I don't know why these two surnames must be used. It may be a little concern of the author. ? But in fact, it is the same for readers, and it is easy for the author to mix up the name in another book, which will cause confusion for many new readers) Even if the article is impressive, the enthusiasm will disappear after a few weeks and months. How to make readers continue to follow the article and look forward to the author's updates is the "wealth password" that the author must master. I thought back to the reason why I fattened up and discarded articles - it was because the articles did not have an event line that really attracted me, and I felt that it was a pity to discard them because they were tasteless. This resulted in many of the articles I collected actually just piled there, growing mold in the dark, with no chance to be seen again. Campus writing has its own limitations, with a small audience and little passion (no plots such as appointments, promises, falling out of horses, etc.), And its main line will be weakened, or even have no strict main line. After all, students' days and nights consist of going to class, finishing get out of class, doing homework, and going to class, and then they actually have to fall in love under such circumstances! You also have to avoid being discovered by teachers and parents! It's still such a secret and humble emotion! They actually asked the author to write hundreds of thousands of words! And readers like it! This is so difficult, not even men have it this hard! (Sorry for being off topic haha) This also basically determines the character design, a top student These are most of the characters. The character set by the author is also among them (the academic group), and they come from a wealthy family with busy parents, so the two of them keep warm. If you want to break this shackles, you must get rid of your love for capital. The author wrote that the heroine (I have forgotten her name...) Has a very talented family, and the heroine can also trade stocks, blah blah blah. In terms of perception, I actually don't have the idea that the heroine is awesome. After all, the heroine still relies on her family. Without her family, high school students would not have the funds to speculate in stocks. This actually gave me a warning - although everyone scorns capital, they still long for the kind of superiority that looks down on all living beings, which also produces cool articles. However, this does not mean that the author's setting is not good, because too many people use this routine. In fact, I still hope that the author will make progress. After all, writing articles consumes the author's time and energy. He is thinking about inspiration every day. After a long time, this will be a painful thing, especially if there is no progress and encouragement. When typing these words, I thought of several inspirations. 1) If it is a campus article about secret love, it should be written in a more detailed and serious way, and some people might watch it; 2) Abo, there are many people writing about it now, which will lead to a saturated market. There are also many people who are not interested in Abo, so Abo has sunk. I don't know if the author wants to write about AO equality (it feels like there shouldn't be), but most of the authors write very plainly, which makes me want to give up immediately, because it feels like they are forcibly elevating the idea of the article. I have seen the copywriting of alpha and beta, and it felt very strange at that time. It is obvious that beta is not worthy of alpha, so I understand how deep-rooted this idea is in my mind, and I understand that it is ridiculous to talk about AO equality without beta. I would like to see the relationship between the two betas, which is the humbleness of ordinary people in the context of the times... But in my opinion, the author still seems to like sweet stories? In fact, I also like it, but the author can add some real obstacles to the sweetness, because the cruelty of this article makes me feel that the author forcibly prevents the two from being together, and the system has no sense of existence. Since we are talking about the system, let's put down one. 3) The existence of the system can be borne by another person. For example, let A bring the system. Let us look at it from another angle and see how sentimental the existence of the system is, making people unable to say love... Then the world is broken. In fact, I did not feel it in the article. The emotion in this article feels so strange? I didn't feel it. In fact, I could write that Girl 1 made a certain move that made Girl 2 fall into a trance, and then remembered it, and the relationship deepened (it's very cliché, so I don't know how to do it). Sigh... I have been writing for an hour. In fact, the writing is very messy, and I don't want to check it again. In fact, my intention is to encourage the author, not to criticize the article. If I don't really want the author to improve, why would I waste so much time writing comments for the article? I hope the author will stick to it. You can write anything, just follow your heart. Writing an article itself means that the "leftover" is king. I don't know if it will hit the author. I actually didn't criticize the author. Don't get me wrong. This is my first time writing a long review. I don't know how to write it... I wonder if it will block the author's comment area... Ouch... Kneel down.
The following are all offensive remarks. If the author doesn't like it, don't read it [eating melon] The ending is so bad that I don't know if everyone likes being the kind of person who hangs on others in reality, but this book really made me angry. Yu didn't show his love for Lin until the end, and wrote Lin like a humble licking gou. All this was attributed to Yu's slowness, but this level can no longer be called slow, it can be said to be chun, and he has never given it to me. After a clear reply from the other party, one party has always doted on the other party infinitely. I don't think they can be happy if they continue like this. Yu feels more guilty towards Lin and does not give the other a sense of security. She is not worthy of Lin's love at all. This kind of relationship is not as good as being. Lin deserves a better omega. In the end, I wrote a side story about Song to perfunctory readers, right? [Eat melon]
Little snakes also have love, hahaha, laugh to death Why don't Xiao Song and the system form a CP, and the two singles can save each other (the dog's head saves his life, haha)
The case has been solved, Lin Zhi likes to be a cowardly omega
I was just about to suggest that the author write about Yu Chu's story, but then I found out that I had already written it. Now I have to fill in the stories about the two of them?
I am also waiting for the new article qaq today
@_@When will you update the article? I've been waiting for it to wither.
I don't know what to say today. Just wish the author a Happy New Year in advance!
I still don't know what Buddhist scriptures are about