My Beauty Score Soared After I Coughed Up Blood

I've finished reading it, but it's still a pity. It was really good to upgrade it bit by bit in the early stage, but it's a pity that it fell apart later on. It felt very rushed from the beginning of the assessment, the various architectures were not clearly written, and there were many bugs. During the assessment, it was still very difficult for the protagonist to deal with a teacher with B-level mental power. It was still difficult to deal with ordinary Zerg on the insect star. His mental power was only D-level. In just a few days, he was able to kill the Insect King. It was also said that no one with SS-level mental power could kill the Insect King. The Zerg setting is also anticlimactic, with the ability to open countless wormholes in the central star, and even assemble an army of Zerg. However, the protagonist was able to touch the Zerg banquet so easily and killed the Zerg King in front of many high-level Zerg races. Once the Zerg Emperor died, all the Zerg races were abolished. If it was really that easy, would the Zerg have existed for so long? Someone has captured the thief before the king, let alone because of the divine blood. People with divine blood are too weak. It is like a child holding a gun and killing the world's top masters under heavy surrounds. It is extremely unreasonable. In the early stage, Mo Si was so powerful and had the power of space that he could go to the Death Star and kill Bai He at will. However, it was not reflected at all in the later stage, and the setting of the Gods did not see any use. The plot of Escape Star is well written, but it also breaks down later on. During the competition between the two major military academies, Zhao Yuanhang had no mental power, but in the end he told Lou Ye that the characteristic of the mental power of students from the other military academy was that they could devour mental power. There are also starships and spaceships for interstellar travel. As a result, the only means of transportation inside the planet are starships, spaceships, and cars. It feels like the settings are all messed up. The competition between the two major military academies was such an important thing, and in the end they were the only participating students and a teacher who went back to school together. From the time the protagonist gradually became stronger to the time he finally graduated, not counting the escape from the insect planet, it actually only took two months of training plus the first few days of the school year. I have been preparing for passing the exam for so long, and now I will graduate directly. There are too many settings and plots that are unreasonable. As much as I liked this article at first, I will be disappointed later. It can also be seen that the big outline is not well organized, which is really a pity.

It's tied. How can I say this? The novel is called "The beauty value soared after vomiting blood." I originally thought it was a slap in the face to upgrade the novel (there are many descriptions of appearance and so on), but I didn't expect that it was mainly a slap in the face from a powerful person. I'm not saying it's bad, it's quite inspirational, but I always felt that it was a bit boring. Another thing is the description of attack. It feels so distracting and doesn't feel like a CP? ? ? The main reason is that the author describes Shou as being very strong and working hard to grow up step by step. In comparison, Gong is not attractive. I always feel that Shou can be a unique and beautiful Yazi without cp.

Why did I suddenly find the Insect King and it was over all of a sudden? I wrote it in such detail before, like the place of exile, how to land on the planet, and how to hone myself. So many things were suddenly skipped, and the whole ending was a mess. Can we not be perfunctory? Anyway, I bought it chapter by chapter. Don't tell me whether you like it or not. Since I bought your article, I think you wrote the first part well. You made me very disappointed. I suddenly jumped to the Zerg Fortress and I thought, oh wow, why did you jump suddenly? Let's see how the author came back and then teleported to the Insect King Star. The group of people were suddenly captured. They said that the Zerg with the nose spirit had been found. Oh well, the nose spirit smelled it. Okay. Sneak in suddenly? ? ? It started to get outrageous, and then jumped directly to the Insect King? ? ? After a few hits, the insects are gone? ? ? Judging from the world view you vaguely revealed before, it is quite big. I was still expecting it to be a long novel, but this is the result? The pit of the gods? A trap from a previous life? I forgot what race's name it was to help Mo Si's trap? ? Originally, when Moss appeared on the scene, he thought, hahaha, why does he feel like a domineering president, but then he chases people as soon as he comes on, and he is like licking a dog when he says something unpleasant? At first I felt like I might be a bit like the CEO of a city, but then I thought, oh, why did I become a licker? Then, was this a child? Afterwards I was speechless. The Protoss has so many moves, choose one that burns potential? ? ? Doesn't potential refer to the potential ability of the height that can be achieved in the future? ? Only weak for a while? I have read so many articles, and any one of them has lost its potential. It is conceivable that potential is very important. The whole article seems to be good, the first part is good, but the last three chapters are just perfunctory, and then I ask for advance payment. After reading your article, I bought the main article chapter by chapter. I feel that it is not worth it. I hope you will continue to make progress next time and don't end with a bad ending. Thank you.

Sprinkle flowers. To be honest, madam, you should go to the male channel to write articles. The adventure before the assessment really made my blood boil.

The previous plots were well written, but the ending felt so rushed, and many of the stories didn't feel like they were well written.

It's a good experience to not be bound by other people's preferences but to go out on your own. The idea is good, but overall the logic is not rigorous, and the ending is too hasty and unreasonable? It feels a bit anticlimactic. . .

Is this ending too rushed? The front looks really nice! It feels like the structure is very rich, but why are the following chapters so perfunctory? Also, are you not going back to school? Didn't you just switch departments? ? Why is it over? ? What a beautiful article! Why is it so unfinished? Come on in the future.

It's very rushed. The first part is fine, but the second part is getting worse and worse, but it still ends well!

Why was it that Alfarang, the five-sense crystal, the background of the temple, and what happened next on the Escape Star were all ended without any explanation?

I feel like there are still a lot of plots that haven't been written yet! ! !