[Hunter X Hunter] Missing You

What is riding style Little unknown~~

The plot is good, but the writing style is a bit childish. (Personal opinion) In fact, I think it would be better if the heroine didn't know the plot, and I feel that your heroine's personality is very strange. Sometimes she is just like Ilmi, sometimes very childish, sometimes very deep. I personally think it is better for the heroine to have a fixed character, otherwise the writing will collapse - -. Overall, the plot of this article is good, (well, the plot is just a description of the cartoon - -)

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… I don't like this ending~~~Is this a tragedy or HE? . . It's painful to watch

After watching it, I had an indescribable feeling It sounds like someone beating someone up

0.0 Is this a tragedy? Heartbroken>^< ((Cry~~

I admire your perseverance. You were able to write it in one go without taking your time. . . However, in this case, not many people will see your article. Only by updating a certain number of words every day can readers find your article. And since you have finished it, you can put it all in the manuscript box and let the system help you publish the article. After all, maybe you write for your own happiness when you write, but after you finish writing, there must always be readers to follow and read the article, which will make it more meaningful. The hunting community is at a low point now, and adults should contribute their own strength. I crawled to read the article. . . . I hope you will listen to my opinion.

Although the process was a little rough, the ending was still good. By the way, are you that lazy on a sunny day? All of you have been gathered into one chapter for us! Do you know how long it took us to finish reading it?!