Fate Comes from a Previous Life

Very well written. The pace is too fast. I suggest you write it longer. ,,?^?,,

Are you not planning to update???

Why aren't there the first 4 pictures?

Hahaha, is the king right? It looks good.

The writing is good and the content is sweet. I like it. However, I suggest that each world be longer. There are only a few chapters in each world. This is too fast. Like the first world, I feel that there is a lot more that can be written, but it is all abbreviated. It is not enough to read.

Haha, that big guy who stepped through the void is a real big guy