The Transmigrate-Into-a-Book Author's Epic Fail

The author's writing is really good. In fact, I have been reading articles for a long time and have been struggling to find good articles. Suddenly when I saw this article, my eyes were completely new. What can be firmly established in my heart is: it turns out that sometimes those articles with few collections on the surface are also treasures. In fact, I admire the author for insisting on finishing this novel, every foreshadowing buried in the book, and the smooth emotional lines between the protagonists. I understand that generating love often requires courage. Perhaps many new authors will face this dilemma when they first start writing books. But I want to tell the author that you are really talented and your first book was really well written. Maybe sometimes this is the meaning of the work itself. Even if it is not satisfactory many times, I don't know which reader will open this book and like this work after a long time. In short, this book is really well written. I can feel the author's care and love for every character in the work. I am also very fortunate that behind this story, there is a kind-hearted author who has contributed to him, so that no matter how long it takes, countless new readers can understand and experience this story by chance. I sincerely wish the author that you can stick to what you want and go smoothly in the future, whether in life or work.

I really like this article. It is not the same as most of the articles nowadays. Readers will not be bored. The echoes are very good and there are many foreshadowings. I love it.

I'm still coming! Finished spreading flowers!! (Even if I don't catch up, I still have to force myself!!! Below is, about the plot and a little (?) Other bb (cover your mouth After reading the full text, the most impressive thing is the sentence "Those who know me tell me that I am worried; those who don't know me tell me what I want." Coincidentally, I was flipping through a friend's Book of Songs two days ago and suddenly saw this sentence, which instantly pulled me back from my thoughts, and I hit the book several times (.) Those who don't know me can tell me what I want. This is actually Ji Xun's contradiction. In fact, as I said before, even in the ending about Ji Xun's disappearance, from the beginning to the end, people in the book did not know who Ji Xun was. They only had Chengyu in their eyes, so Ji Xun did not leave any traces. Because he "didn't know me", he quickly disappeared completely. Those who don't know me are everyone in the world in the book, and what do I want? I think it's not only a literal sense of not knowing and what I want, but also a kind of self-knowledge. What do you want? Perhaps what he is looking for is the real Ji Xun himself, not a shell or a label. This process from not knowing me to knowing me is the beginning and end of the relationship between Yuan Xun and me. It is also the journey of Ji Xun's courage to step out of the cage created by Cheng Yu's identity. Because he "knows me", Shen Xiuyuan is worried about Ji Xun. He can feel Ji Xun's troubles and confusion, and works hard to make Ji Xun more confident in himself. This is most intuitively reflected in Zhang Hao's plot. Also because he "knows me", he is restrained enough and is willing to say "I'll wait for you" to Ji Xun in the end. But I personally would be more inclined to put this kind of "knowing myself" in Ji Xun. Ji Xun's character image shows changes and growth that are visible to the naked eye. From the initial ignorance and frustration of no one knowing me, to the fear and self-abasement of having his identity revealed, to the end when he was able to accept himself and fully show the side of Ji Xun to Shen Xiuyuan. The details and the dark sadness and pain can be seen clearly through slowly stroking. The incident between Zhang Hao and Juechen was undoubtedly the biggest blow to Ji Xun. It was a desperate situation and an adversity, but it was also his turning point, a chance of survival and a flower. It can be said that the most important line of this article is Ji Xun's self-awareness process. This is also different from the path taken by most of today's articles, which makes people feel "brightened". I think the emotional line is also a highlight of this article. Their love is neither passionate nor mixed with hatred, but a kind of thoughtfulness and affection that I know you and worry about you. An ordinary plate of mung bean cake, the corner of the quilt carefully tucked at night, and the hairpins carved bit by bit, these things are all ordinary and close to people, but they are invisibly integrated with the most precious love. I personally think that this is the most direct and touching proof that two people like each other, and sometimes it can be compared to the solitary love between life and death. However, they also share this feeling. After vaguely realizing Ji Xun's identity, Shen Xiuyuan was uneasy but determined. He knew that Ji Xun would leave, but he was willing to pay for Ji Xun and was willing to wait for him to come back. The two hearts were cautious, feeling disappointed and melancholy because of their failed expectations, but they suddenly touched each other and depended on each other. This is survival from desperate situations. Overall, the emotional line of this article is very good. It can make people feel that Yuan Xun and the two are not just flat characters in the book, but people with full personalities who have poured the author's love and expectations into them. The only drawback is that I feel that the plot is not that complete, and the backgrounds of some characters are not clarified. What is a little clearer is the story of the Dragon Girl. Perhaps thanks to the extras, the backgrounds of other characters are more briefly mentioned through the mouth of a certain character. Including the final battle, I personally felt that it ended a little hastily and the clues were not as clear as in the first copy. Of course, it may be that I was too hasty to read a section in the middle and didn't understand it clearly. If that's the case, I will kowtow and admit my guilt (.) It can be seen that the author is working hard to conceive and write a good article. I feel that this way he has lived up to himself. Thinking back to your Weibo post where you said you were too busy at work and still had to write articles. At the end, you said you were worried about the bottleneck, and your original intention remains unchanged from the past to the present. I seem to see a little bit of myself. Whether or not anyone cares is never the intention of writing. It is normal to feel some distress and confusion from time to time. No matter how big or small the structure of the story is, whether the article is particularly well written and whether the readers are satisfied, these are all secondary factors. Love always comes from the heart, and it should pour out from your pen. The above are my personal thoughts and nonsense, mixed with a lot of inexplicable emotions. I am really a nonsense superman. Kneel down (cover your face). If there is anything wrong, it must be my faulttt! This is the first long review in my life, for you!!

It's true that I'll look at it later after I gain weight (?>?<?)

Why, I couldn't have read this book earlier!

I thought Zhang Hao was reborn, but I didn't expect that he actually wore a book. Moreover, his character at the beginning was very different from his character at the end. One was fierce and sharp during the sect competition, and the other was timid and a bit wretched as a man in black robe. I thought he was dressed later, but I guessed wrongly.

??? Is this why Xun can always use casuistry?

I understand, this is an inspirational article (respect and applaud)

Good guys, this is the beginning of the game where you kidnap all the bosses directly. .

Survival from a desperate situation... It is not only a thrilling escape, but also the loss and hesitation of two hearts after they thought they had hit the bottom, but they suddenly saw the sun, suddenly touched each other, and were happy with each other.