The Real Young Master Is Also the True Demon Lord

If you haven't written down the rating, please go to the comments. I like the entire structure of this article, including some of the processing. This type of modern and immortal type is also rare, and the final setting is also perfect. However, there are some minor issues that still feel a little lacking (for example, I feel that there are too many techniques for changing scenes at the beginning and then returning to the content of the previous chapter, which may make people feel that the sense of continuity is slightly lacking) (for example, some small settings in places that have nothing to do with the main line are not so sophisticated. Although the place is small, it will make people feel that there is something out of it, which will affect the reading experience. Also, Kuan, typo! Typo! It is already in a state of frequent errors! This is very painful for discerning people! Left branch and right handcuff (not clumsy) Blessed to the soul (no blessing to the soul) Soft and hard to grind (not soft and hard to grind) shuddering (not to millet) octogenarian (not to be trendy) There are many other things that are not listed here. What should I say? Although it is an online article, I feel that the word problem still needs to be solved. After all, children can also read it. It would be bad if it misleads children.

It feels like there are many lines buried in it, including emotional lines, world lines, time travel lines, family lines, and national lines. The composition is very large, but when you read on, every line is not well written, every line is confusing, there are too many elements, and the character creation is constantly changing. The supporting characters are very single and the protagonist's positioning is very unclear. Anyway, the overall view is very confusing and disappointing.

How should I put it? I read the txt and saw Chapter 38. I thought it was pretty good at the time, and the setting was quite innovative? The male protagonist is also quite to my liking, although the cheap parents, elder brother Bai Lianhua and younger brother are both emmmm, anyway, let's just use Jinjiang's normal IQ setting. I came here and bought chapters 38-120. When I saw chapter 58, there was an emotional scene. Then skip to the end. Now I feel very regretful, I should have read one chapter and bought one. I want to watch love, I want to watch slaps in the face, but nothing. The huge conspiracy barely unravels as the chapters progress, making it very frustrating to watch. Let's talk about this emotional scene, this, this, first of all I want to state that I am not attacking and controlling, but, I can't explain clearly, anyway, it makes me quite awkward everywhere. It feels like this object was acquired by Xiao Gong, and the protagonist only wants to save the world. God loves the world, so t0m0d don't fall in love (it's not), or else there will be no CP if you change it, right? I think this feels as weird as Ruyi's Royal Love in the Palace. Numb. More than ten dollars. Numb.

It looks good in the front, but what is there in the back? It's all over in a hurry, it's ridiculous.

In fact, I don't mind if the author writes longer, but I really feel that the ending is too hasty, and didn't the previous first-life New Year greeting want to kill the protagonist? I thought he was in cahoots with the evil god, but it turned out he was nothing. He was really just a low-level cannon fodder. I hope there will be a side story about the secret realm of the great demon

Gee, the plot line is not very exciting, and the emotional line is not very sweet. I can only say that the plot is relatively complete and it is watchable. It is a bit anticlimactic.

When I read this article, I always wanted to see the slap in the face and couldn't find it until the end. Can anyone tell me?

Good writing, good ideas, good details, and a perfect male protagonist. How can it be so unsatisfactory when put together? The author's writing is too messy.

I felt that the first part of my writing was okay, but in the later stage, I was very sloppy. I thought I had found a treasure trove of good articles, but I didn't write them seriously... I can only say that I feel very complicated now, but I really like some of the settings. I hope I will write seriously in the future.

Is this actually a trap? ? ?