The Dating Show Stand-In Went Crazy

I re-read it again today. My wife is not very good at writing love lines. I feel that the love lines in these newly updated chapters are weird and the progress is too fast. It seems like "Ah, he is interested in you, and you two immediately got together." It started when Qin Ge blushed. If I remember correctly, Qin Ge never felt much towards the Best Actor. What made Qin Ge suddenly blush towards the Best Actor? Are there any plot and emotional changes and transitions in the middle? No, it was very sudden. He just blushed. The actor suddenly succeeded in chasing her. The character of the actor is also a bit broken. At first he was a gentle actor, then he was a sultry actor, and now he is a greasy actor. I don't think a person who has just successfully chased his wife will say directly, "This bed is not bad, very suitable for doing some exercise." Just like turning on double speed, Qin Ge has just developed a crush on the actor, has a wedding room, is living together, and is about to have a married life. This is not normal and unrealistic. These fragments should be written separately and need other content to foreshadow them. The characters in the early stages are quite good, but once you get to these chapters, they suddenly look like dolls. You hold one in each hand and make them mouth to mouth. I hope that you, madam, can read this review in your busy schedule and refer to my suggestions appropriately. I really like this book, so I don't want it to go downhill. Of course, my review may cause some trouble to you, so I'll say sorry in advance.

Hahahahahaha the heroine is so cute

Well, my favor with the actor has dropped. I didn't like him much in the first place. I have to let my beautiful sister face the vitriol from someone who likes him. Blacklist, come on in.

Now I see how actor Fu is so familiar with him

Madam, didn't you say update? Why was your comment deleted by the administrator????

Finally! Finally, do you know how I spent the time waiting for your update?! You know what?!

Update, madam, please, I've read these 40 chapters several times (???)

You! Still know to come back! I hope for the stars and the moon and I finally hope for you back!

Gone? Is this gone? I can't even pick up the phone

Ah ah ah, the author has passed a few days again, Hand over your manuscript box quickly