The copywriting is not attractive enough. If you have not read the text, you will feel a little confused.
If you want to make this article a little longer, I suggest you revise it.
There are so many characters in the first chapter, both in dialogue and plot, that it's a bit difficult to digest.
The writing is good, and the ancient style is well grasped.
The copywriting is not attractive enough. If you have not read the text, you will feel a little confused. If you want to make this article a little longer, I suggest you revise it. There are so many characters in the first chapter, both in dialogue and plot, that it's a bit difficult to digest. The writing is good, and the ancient style is well grasped.