
What's So Great About a White Moonlight?
白月光有什么了不起
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 326k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
98Chapters
4.4kFavorites
8.5Score
1.2kNutrient gifts
8kClicks per chapter
1.5kComments
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Reader comments 36
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How to describe it? Many people say that the torture of the boss is not satisfying enough, but in fact I think it is just right, and all the torture is in line with the character. But the ending gave me the feeling that it was too light and too brief. It would be nice to tell the story before the two reconciled and add some more. Because after six years, it is impossible for two people to remain completely unchanged. Then the process of change needs to be reflected, at least expressed. For me as a reader, because there is no talk about the two people now or in the past six years, I have no way to empathize with the two characters in the finale. I just feel that these two people are strangers bearing the names of the two people in the previous chapter. So if there are supplements, the emotional transition will be more natural.
This ending is actually unsatisfactory! I hope Shou will have another career and love, gong, whatever you love, don't bother Shou!
Ha? Why is it that the entire article is finished... It feels like it's stuck in your throat and you tortured me for one chapter? ? ?
It's quite miserable. To me, Su and 17 are both quite miserable. The scumbag is attacking, hoping to get a broken leg as the price.
Tsk, I still feel that the torture was not harsh enough.
It's miserable, but what does this have to do with him hurting Xiao Qi?
Sigh~ What can I say about this crematorium? It feels useless.
Speechless, is this how capitalists feel good about themselves?
It's quite miserable, but the lack of respect for Xiao Qi and the damage caused have not been resolved.
The ending is a bit rushed, but the beginning is quite interesting.