[Qi/Fu] Greenwood Comb

Yeah yeah yeah, finished reading! Since I haven't read the original work, I don't know much about the settings of the characters in the original work, so I'm just basing my story on this fanfic. The writing style is acceptable, the story telling ability is good, and there is a sense of immersion; The paragraph layout of the article was a bit confusing at first. Several people's words were put into one paragraph, which made it difficult to read. However, this problem gradually improved later on. It can be seen that it would be better to write more; Maybe because it is written from the perspective of the "female protagonist", the description of the other protagonist is not so strong, so that it feels a bit abrupt later on, and the feelings come a bit suddenly. The author can try to describe the male protagonist more, which will make it easier for readers to resonate;

It's great, can't wait for the next chapter!