Please add my new novel, I Turned Out to Be My Own Sucker, to your collection! Dual quick transmigration. Blurb at the end.
What a rotten transmigration into a book!
When Duan Yang first learned he'd transmigrated into a book, he was overjoyed.
Then, six months later, a System appeared and told him:
1. He'd transmigrated into a cultivation BL novel on Green JJ, with a male lead who was the top?!
2. His transmigration had been a system error?
The System had only detected the error six months after he arrived. And it wasn't even his System: it belonged to the guy who'd transmigrated into the protagonist's scum top.
3. The System was here specifically to warn him to behave and stay a minor character. He mustn't interfere with the main plot, and he especially mustn't let the fellow countryman who'd transmigrated into the scum top find out about him. Otherwise, even if the System didn't eliminate him, the protagonist might, fearing a threat?
Duan Yang: …
There was no going back, and he didn't want to get involved in this BL plot either. He was perfectly happy to be an insignificant nobody.
But fate had other plans. He happened to walk in on the scum top's first attempt to force himself on the canon love interest...
The original protagonist was a scummy top who slept with anyone and everyone. Even after getting the cool, ethereal protagonist receiver, he still flirted around with men and women alike. His first time with the receiver had been forced too, though in the original story they were both drugged and the receiver had gone along with it halfheartedly. But judging by the sounds this time, the receiver was putting up quite a fight...
As a kind and concerned citizen, Duan Yang stood at the cave entrance with his sword, his conscience torn: should he rescue him or not?
If he did, he might get exposed.
If he didn't, well... his pure, lotus-like junior brother was about to be violated...
A broad-minded straight guy who transmigrated into a book as the receiver + an original, aloof and righteous white lotus receiver who turns into a demonic white lotus top, after planting a demonic seed in his Daoist heart.
In short: the immortal-like receiver he devoted himself to protecting tops him.
Content warning: The receiver has had sex with people other than the top.
Blurb for I Turned Out to Be My Own Sucker, a dual quick transmigration story:
A promising young man in the prime of his life,
with his career on the rise, dies in a sudden accident.
Another victim is the childhood nemesis he's known forever.
He's forced to travel with this nemesis to other worlds, fixing bugs and completing missions.
And their identities in each new world are quite something.
Because the System follows the principle that pairing "men" and "women" makes work easier (it has a mean sense of humor),
it makes him experience a whole range of lives: a lowly, powerless eunuch, a village tyrant everyone hates, a sleazy head teacher, and more.
His nemesis, meanwhile, gets to go from imperial consort to village belle to school beauty...
It can't get more ridiculous, and yet it can.
These two poor suckers...
A moody, snide, melodramatic, devoted top & a good-natured receiver who still gets driven to the edge by the top every time
Younger childhood friends
Theme: We only get one life, so live it for yourself
I feel that the character design is quite special. The two protagonists have been through so much but have always adhered to their original intentions. Their kindness has never been lost. And the scumbag who came through has gone from being annoying at the beginning to slowly understanding and accepting it. The extra story is also gratifying that he took the initiative to get out of the quagmire and pursue his own path. I feel that everyone's image is quite plump. At first glance, it looks like a character set in a routine novel, but as I continue to read, I feel that it is quite full and special. After reading it, I feel healed, a sense of longing for a long life (for an engineering student, is it really difficult to express this?)
I suggest that the author clear up the mines and talk about more than one person. When I saw Li Yan, it felt normal because of the mine clearings. But when the wolf came out, I really didn't predict it. I was instantly stunned. Things seemed to be developing in a strange direction.
Even if the article is set up well, the sentences throughout the article are not smooth, there are typos and omissions, and there are some logic problems. I suggest my wife revise the article later, and the article will be more readable.
Congratulations on finishing it. When I saw Minefield before, I didn't dare to read this article for a while, but I just finished it today. I like my senior fellow apprentice very much, and fortunately, I finally achieved righteousness. I hope the next one will be better
Why can't I always keep up with the character's mental journey... It feels like there are too many twists and turns without any foreshadowing. Although the plot is pretty bloody, there is always a little jump and it is not particularly coherent...
Overall it's a good book from the ending. The ending of The Demon Lord is a bit unexpected and feels rushed.
Alas, people are very complicated. I feel that even if he gets married... Duan Yang might just feel, "Well, it's not my idea, but it's okay. Of course I can refuse, but it's not unacceptable if it happens."... How to put it, it's the numbness after being stuck in an environment for too long. It feels like there is some kind of restraint, although it's not obvious, it's just vague, but it's still uncomfortable. The previous chapter was the same as the previous chapter. Duan Yang seemed to suddenly wake up again when he saw the wedding clothes... It felt like he was in the family before. Do what you really want to do instead of being pushed around by circumstances. (My little personal thoughts...)
I skipped through it and read it. I liked the first part, but the second part was because I have a bit of an emotional mysophobia (?). To be honest, I couldn't accept what happened with 0 and the wolf demon (it must have happened). I honestly couldn't accept it, but it was still very good-looking. I guess I can't decide. I felt [heartbroken] in the middle. I'm sorry, but the writing is actually quite good.
This deer youyou... Is quite hard to describe.
I feel that some sentences lack predicate verbs and do not read smoothly.