Immortal Lord, Your Bird Is Gone

Finished spreading flowers ~ It would be nice if there were more cars qwq I haven't seen enough

The subject matter is good, but all the twists and turns are too abrupt. There is no explanation of how the male protagonist, a man who is dedicated to the Tao, could fall in love so deeply. At the beginning, I thought the female protagonist was just a carefree little princess, but I didn't expect that she is also the future emperor, and she even knows it. There is no narration to pave the way, and the dialogue between the Emperor of Heaven and Yue Lao does not give any indication of the important responsibilities that the heroine will bear in the future. Is everyone's love just love at first sight??? Is the author a high school student??? I don't mean it in a derogatory way, I just think that people who go to college with this view on love will not be so simple and crude that there is only one way to fall in love at first sight. Everyone, including the protagonist, is a tool man.

The plot setting is a little strange...

Big~ It feels like the transition between the two phases of life in heaven and earth is unnatural (I give you a small suggestion because I like it so much)

I just watched Spreading Flowers after it was finished. The ending was a bit rushed, but it was still pretty good~

I also felt that the ending was very rushed and made me look like a subway grandpa. Many of them have not been explained clearly. The senior sister's and the villain's are all pitfalls in the early stage. Will it be over if they are not filled up? So unexpected

Finished spreading flowers! It ended a little too quickly. I'm looking forward to the author's next work~

Ah ah ah, this is how it turned out to be

Nice! Finish spreading flowers?

Wow, oh, poor little Tingbai