The Courtesan

I am dissatisfied with this ending, not because it is unsatisfactory, but because it is too perfect. Individual abilities are limited. Since this concept has been repeatedly emphasized in the previous article, I tentatively think that the author hopes that this book will be closer to reality and reflect reality. So it seems very incongruous to end with a few lines about the heroine overcoming the difficulty of giving birth to a daughter through her decades of hard work. I can see that the author hopes that his work will be more than just FMCG, but the ending of the extra chapter really damages the artistry of the work. But I have to say that apart from the ending, this novel is still very interesting. If it is published, I would like to buy it and collect it. I can feel that the author is getting better and better as he writes. Come on~

I have a curse word that I don't know whether to say or not. Is this really the end? Was the author hit on the head while he was sleeping? Ah, the rest of the story is all gone. There must be a certain degree of bad ending.

The author is a full-time author, and this is the biggest hit this year, right? I can't get up to collect other books even though the author keeps changing the subject matter and opening new books. I really need to reflect on myself.

As readers, we do not require the length of the article, nor do we want the heroine to be with anyone, but we want a story, not a worldview setting. It was too abrupt. When I wanted to tell my friend this story, I could only tell her what the world was like. As for the heroine's story, there was no such thing. She was just a tool in the setting. The ending was also very abrupt. The heroine was in pain but her struggle was limited. The way she solved the world's problems in the extra story was too inexplicable and there was no suitable transition.

After reading it, I still have some unfinished thoughts, but from my perspective as a writer myself, it is actually right to end it here. What should I write next? What kind of dance did the red concubine perform again? Write about another man who fell under the red concubine's skirt? Who can write who understands the suffering of the red concubine? The core of Hong Fei's suffering lies in what the author repeatedly emphasizes: "Having seen the light, you cannot tolerate the darkness." But as a female singer, what can she do? She can't do anything, she can't leave if she is so red, but if she is not so red, she will only be more miserable, and her pain is also one of the reasons why she is so red. She loves to dance, but the better she dances, the redder she becomes and the more painful she becomes. This is a knot that cannot be untied, tightly entangled with her. So in essence, so many of the comments in the previous comment section asking for "I want to see the shop", "I want to see the dancing" and "I want to see the male protagonist" are all trying to force the red concubine to die. Hong Fei wants to escape the pain, but there are only three possibilities. 1. The problem of having boys and not having girls in the world has been solved, fundamentally solving the root cause of women being treated as objects (it cannot be said to be the complete root cause. When social productivity cannot keep up, the status of women will always be lower than men, but it is better than the purgatory described in the current book. At least in the normal timeline, low-ranking people can be released) Second, after the red concubine has survived this period of time, she retires. After leaving this circle, she no longer has to deal with her benefactors, and at least on the surface she no longer has to face the fact that she has been objectified. She may be escaping, but in the end it will be easier to live away from the harm. Third, travel back to modern times, needless to say, completely stay away from that environment.

Studying medicine is indeed a bit bizarre. If you think about it carefully, you can't rule out the possibility of success. The main reason is that it doesn't fit in with the text. The main text went on for two hundred chapters, and in the end, he suddenly learned medicine to save the country in the extra chapter. Hahahahaha. Maybe the author wrote this in the outline. At the end of the writing, he felt that it was too funny to write it seriously, so he published the extra chapter.

It would be great if the text could be edited more. The plot of the whole text is quite simple. There is no plot about the relationship between the red concubine and women other than the female singer. For example, the red concubine always has to meet the hostess when she is on a business trip, and there is not much description of the relationship between the sisters and her sisters. The issue of whether King Zheng and King Kang have concubines has also been ignored. The presence of Li Mi and A Qi is also very weak. This article is a pity. The plot would have been really brilliant, but I really felt the pain of the red concubine, which was very depressing.

I think the ending is pretty good. I don't want Concubine Hong to be with another man, and having to take birth control is scary. After all, it's difficult to deal with this background. It's great to find a career you want to fight for and work hard for it.

This is the best ending, I cried a lot.

I think this is the best ending for Concubine Hong.