A Promise, a Farewell

What a great piece of writing...

That poor essence... Silence... No, no, I still have to say, your article is very beautiful... I am so green...

Netizen Chu Tiankuo downstairs, your comments are rather general and focused on character analysis, which is quite one-sided, so I went to the essence. Please understand. Thanks.

"About Jue" is a very short article. Bu Bu's articles are always like a glimpse, surprising. Although the article is short, we might not be able to describe the emotions that permeate it clearly even if we use seven or eight thousand words. First of all, you need to clean up your writing style. I can only say that the writing style is so beautiful... The first time I read it, most people are not used to it. After reading it a few times, I will feel the freshness brought by the unique writing style. There are many JJ writers, but there are relatively few who truly have their own unique style. And no, I am still a newcomer. It is really commendable to have such a writing style. The stories in Nobu are relatively simple, but what makes them unique is the writing that definitely plays a major role. I would venture to give Bu Bu's writing style a poetic style. After I read a few words, I felt that it was as long and short as poetry, and it was thought-provoking. The story is very simple. There are actually only three characters, Xuan, Yi, and Ruoqiu. The agreement between two people turns against the third person. This seems to be an all too common scenario. However, the author can turn such a story into a poignant and moving poem, which shows his great skills. Whether it's Xuan's hesitation, Yi's unrepentance, or Ruoqiu's hatred, in just a thousand words, we see a dream, a scene that changes in an instant, flowers bloom and fall, which is jaw-dropping. The feeling of emotion after reading the article cannot be described in words. It just exists in the heart and makes people remember it vaguely. It's like the faint fragrance of flowers blooming, sometimes disappearing, like the sound of flutes in the valley, sometimes far and sometimes near. The smile at the corner of the mouth and the reeds on the shore are all like dreams from the past. Trying to grasp them is in vain. They say they cannot be traced, but they are still vivid in their minds. In the end, there were only three days of wandering around, and there was no end to the lingering charm. Killing Ling, killing love. The agreement between Xuan and Yi is stronger than gold. But it was Xuan who ruined his feelings. From the moment he held the killing sword towards Yi, Yi's heart was already broken. The relationship between the two has become a dream of yesterday. The greatness of emotion lies in its steadfastness, which does not allow any value to be higher than it. And Xuan actually held his sword against Yi. He puts the value of items above feelings, and in the end, he can only get hurt. Between the two of them, the clear and shallow river man appeared quietly. The crack is as shallow as a rut, but cannot be repaired; as narrow as a hair, but insurmountable. If we just shake hands and make peace, and admit that emotional value is ultimately higher than material things, it will be nothing more than an ordinary article. The climax is not that Xuan wants to kill Yi, but that Ruoqiu kills Yi. At this moment, the world was turned upside down, and it was so amazing. If Qiu kills Yi, the climax is the same moment as the ending, leaving only a slow ending that makes people forget. In the end, Xuan buried his love. Only then did he understand that it was too late. Chi, Chi is always helpless and sad, standing empty. This feeling can be recalled later, but it was already at a loss. Still need to arrange a few bricks in small rows. Yes, the article is well written, but there is a problem with the layout and needs to be changed... The plot is short and concise, which is very good and suits the style of writing. But sometimes the first impression is confusing. I read it twice before I knew what happened at the end. In addition, you can also consider more innovative plots. You can't just rely on the writing, the plot is also important. In the part where Ruo Qiu kills Yi, the reason has not been hinted before (could it be because of the quarrel when they were young? I wonder). Although this can have an unexpected surprise effect and generate implicit plot speculation, it is not recommended to use it too much.