+ He Tian came alone to the big city to make a living. Everyone said he was useless and had no chance with Qin Shu, but his sincere devotion won over Dr. Qin, whom everyone else thought was far out of his league. For eight years, the two kept each other company and supported one another, weathering life's storms through the ordinary routines of daily life. He Tian built a career of his own and transformed his life. He thought the biggest secret of his life would never be brought up again, but fate took a long, winding route and was destined to return to the beginning.
+ Qin Shu was stubborn enough to keep charging into a brick wall. He ignored his family's objections and his friends' advice, resolutely choosing the man who had promised to love him until the end of the world. But when their eight-year relationship reached its end, that man told him, "Take care of yourself. I'm not inviting you to the wedding." While everyone around him cursed the scumbag and tried every way they could to steer his life back onto the right path, Dr. Qin only wanted to watch the scumbag show off his new romance on social media.
+ He Tian: You're more wonderful than spring, darling. Mwah, mwah, mwah~
+ Qin Shu: Are you kidding me? You're really showing off now!
+ An optimistic, determined gong with a sunny disposition and occasional cuteness x a gentle, stubborn, socially awkward, considerate but not prickly doctor shou
+ I've finally revised everything that needed changing. It took so much effort, orz.
Theme: You can't change the world, but you can decide what kind of person you want to be.
I feel like there's still a chapter or two left. Are you considering writing a spin-off (OvO)
Part01 The Name of Wen The first one is about the title of the article. I think my wife's literary name is very nice! Although most of the popular literary titles in Jinjiang nowadays are of lively style, this title of Madam is very beautiful and is my favorite type hahahaha. Part02 The Bones and Blood of Literature The story line framework of an article must be the skeleton that supports the article. Although I had a slight headache when I first read this article, after reading the whole article, it became better at the 14th chapter. The whole story is well conceived, and it is a very flesh-and-blood group portrait. Even the characters who appear in a few scenes will have a neat and complete flip setting, such as Mr. Jiang. It was completely unexpected and reasonable. I quite like the reversal of this character. One is the reversal of his son's understanding of him, and the reversal of the decryption of the story between his wife and him. In this article, there are basically no useless characters. After reading the whole story, my overall feeling was that it was very refreshing - because everyone contributed to the advancement of the story, and every character was used on the edge, especially in the end when all the characters were intertwined. Those who originally thought it was baffling why they were mentioned all converged on the main line of the story. At that time, it felt like a bunch of knotted threads, after smoothing them out, weaving them into a main line. Forgive me for my lack of words, the only feeling after reading it is, wow, this is great. The story is clever. But my wife feels there is a little flaw in the way she writes. Because I really like my wife's story, I will give you some suggestions. 1-Introduction of new characters. I feel like the introduction of new characters in Madam could be slower. Especially at the beginning. To be honest, I was almost persuaded by the beginning to miss this good article. Because there were so many characters, and I had not yet become familiar with them, they passed by in a flash. I felt like my wife was a little too rushed. How should I put it, my wife's writing feels to me less like a novel and more like a film and television script that lacks transition instructions. Especially when new characters are introduced, there is often no warning from top to bottom, and the perspective of a new character is suddenly opened. In fact, this should be regarded as a POV narrative method, but unlike ordinary novels that go into the inner world of the characters, the wife is more coldly showing what happened. It just felt like there was a little less buffering and a gradual process of understanding the character, and it seemed a little too hard. 2-The transition of the article. How should I put it, mainly because my wife's writing style is too similar to a film and television script, but it does not mark the transition of each scene like a script, so when you first read it, it feels very confusing. In fact, many online articles nowadays are also written in the form of script transitions, but before each transition, there will definitely be a separator symbol and a brief description of where the plot of that small unit takes place. This way it won't be so confusing for everyone. The same problem also occurs in the intersection between the memory killing and the first solid line. When my wife wrote this part, she basically did not over-edit it. She directly connected the reality with the past, which is really easy to make people look stupid. Of course, I also noticed that in the second half of the article, my wife had started to use slightly more obvious words to distinguish between the two. However, I think the two are excessive. Some of the insertion positions of the memory killing may need to be reconsidered. Overall, I think the wife's story concept is already very boss-like, and it would be better if the story could be given a break. I'm surprised that this article only has 200,000 words. According to the structure of this story, I think it must be 300,000 words. Also, I really disliked He Tiantian at first, hahaha, I started to like him after the mystery was revealed! But it's a bit regretful that the ending of the article felt like it ended abruptly and was not finished. I always felt that there would be another chapter.
The story is a good one, but the storytelling is confusing. One moment is now, the other moment is memories, it's a mess. The ending was not good either, it felt like the story suddenly stopped before it was finished. Also, the protagonist He is so fucking disgusting! Even if you die, how can Dr. Qin survive for the rest of his life after pulling off such a scam?! What a scumbag!
I looked at the big name and then read the text below. Hmm, you need to add more vinegar to Malatang!
I'm looking at 1, 2, 3, 4... There are several pairs. Isn't it just me who is jealous... 🥺
"After the accident, because it didn't meet the requirements..." This is a big bug for the author~ Wait a minute, Old Wu is dead, who is this Old Deng?
I think Teacher Ji and his little red hair have quite a chemistry. What kind of forced love is there for a rebellious puppy...
First, let me see how bad Teacher Ji is at speaking... Forget it, Teacher Ji, you better stop talking...
Author, I beg you, can you give me some follow-up? I fainted from crying so early in the morning that my nose was blocked and I couldn't breathe. I felt so uncomfortable and collapsed. I didn't expect that Gong said that he would accompany Shou in the form of ashes. If Gong is not dead, can you give a definite ending? I can't accept such an ending. Such a cute Gong is going to die. How can Shou live? The sweeter the memories, the bleaker the reality is. I feel so uncomfortable. Can the author take pity on me and give me a better ending 😭 😭
I always thought Liang Guiqiu was my mother [covering face, laughing and crying]