The Plan to Train My Junior Brother into a God
培养师弟成神计划
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 160k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
57Chapters
3.4kFavorites
9.2Score
476Nutrient gifts
6.3kClicks per chapter
507Comments
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Extras
The Beloved Heartthrob Is Always Coveted by Invading Characters [Quick Transmigration]
Even Male Supporting Characters Want to Fall in Love [Quick Transmigration]
I Woke Up With Amnesia and Became Famous
My Junior Brother Insists on Cultivating the Demonic Path
Suspended [ABO]
[Di Long] Binding the Dragon
She Suddenly Became a Sensation
Reader comments 40
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This is a short story worth watching. The whole story is like a glass of 50° warm water. Compared with other novels about cultivating immortals and being beautiful, its plot is not too ups and downs, but it is better in that the story is compact, the rhythm is brisk, the content is complete, and there are no obvious logical problems. If I have to say it, the shaping and system of the final villain are a bit lacking (perhaps because of the shortness of the article). The emotional line of the protagonist is also very clear, and despite the short length of the article, the emotional direction is still natural, sincere and natural. All in all, highly recommended.
I could probably write it longer. What can I say? The emotional scenes and plot are a bit too rushed. In fact, it can be told in detail.
After watching it, I feel so sad. I don't dare to watch it carefully. It is clear that Master Ji and his junior brother are together in the end, but it makes me feel so uncomfortable and makes me feel sour.
Ahhhhhhh, I have finished chasing! The writing is very good, and it appeals to my taste. When I saw Ma Yuan and Biochemistry, my DNA moved. I happened to be in the review week, and my daily happiness is reading novels at night hahahahahahahahaha
The deputy CP made me a little sad?
It turns out that Elder Dong and Ji Yaozhen are a couple. After reading the text, they suddenly felt a little confused.
After subscribing to the full book, I feel that the author is a little rushed in writing later and will quickly go over the emotional details. There is no kind of characterization, it is just that the writing focuses on density and density, which is a bit average. The side story of the deputy CP is quite interesting, and He has some sadistic regrets that are very catchy. I hope the author will produce better works in the future~
Finished reading! Very interesting!
Finished reading ~ Check in and spread flowers
It felt a bit fast, and the emotions exploded before they were accumulated. The writing was good and the plot was reasonable, but I didn't leave a deep impression.