The Heroine You Can't Win Over

I feel that the author's writing style and ideas are quite good, but when I read it, I felt a little sluggish. I thought for a moment that maybe the author was not very good in two aspects. These are just my own little thoughts. Don't mind. First of all, I think the timeline is not clear enough. The author wrote the content of the fourth life, so the time logic must be clear enough. I couldn't figure it out when I was reading. When the little Phoenix was born, Lin Bujin had already lived for a hundred years. At this time, he met the heroine. How long did it take for the world to pass, and it took a hundred years for the heroine to gather her soul after she came to earth. If the male and female protagonists get along for a hundred years, three hundred years have passed in the mortal world. This is still not retrospective. It is a bit inconsistent with the two hundred years in the original text. Also, I think it is a little difficult to sort out the time when various things happened. Secondly, I feel that the content of this book is a little too detailed, because I feel that some plots can actually be passed quickly. For example, the killing of the young emperor in the palace was a bit delayed, and then Po Lin Bu Chu used his brother's identity to set up an array in the palace to kill many monks, and the heroine's master died. I think this section can be written a little more. Overall, there are no flaws, and these are just my personal opinions. This is something that I felt was not very smooth when I was reading the book. Maybe what I said was not very good or right. The beholder has different opinions.

The author really writes very well. I like Qingqing so much. How can I describe it? It's really good!

This villain is harder to kill than my cockroaches 🍉 Even Brother Qiang can't survive with this villain

Very nice, I haven't seen such good writing in a long time

The author's scenario construction is great, and it is easy to form a picture in my mind through the words!

The author's scenario construction is great, and it is easy to form a picture in my mind through the words!

You are miserable, you have fallen in love 🤩

Lin Tai is so stupid, he is simply cheating the player so that he can live as a villain.

Finished chasing? The subject matter is actually very attractive, and the author's writing style is also very good. The only drawback is that the plot in the middle and later parts is a bit long-winded. But overall it's good?

Finished with flowers