
A Secret History of the Interstellar Federation
星际联邦秘史
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 3k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
2Chapters
511Clicks per chapter
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I think the author's writing style is very restrained, with a complete background, rigorous and detailed feeling, like a glass of salt water, a very special and unique feeling. It is not as gorgeous as other writings, but it is unexpectedly to my liking. I got to know you through the article "The Killing of the Avengers". I thought it was very good. I had such inspiration before but failed to put it into practice. I also read the article "Crown of Thorns". The background characters were okay, but the language was too long and the sentences were not broken appropriately. The action description could be more incisive. In short, I also like this article. Although the articles I have seen so far (I couldn't help but praise them after reading three articles) are very short, only one or two chapters. But it doesn't feel as sloppy as other new articles, with strange logic and out-of-the-box thinking. I think the author's outline should be clear, and the plot should be advanced bit by bit like a wheel. This really tickled my fancy. Come on, come on, come on, I look forward to updating your articles. Reading your articles gives me the feeling of reading a novel. If I can finish one, I believe it will be a masterpiece. 💪
I think the author's writing style is very restrained, with a complete background, rigorous and detailed feeling, like a glass of salt water, a very special and unique feeling. It is not as gorgeous as other writings, but it is unexpectedly to my liking. I got to know you through the article "The Killing of the Avengers". I thought it was very good. I had such inspiration before but failed to put it into practice. I also read the article "Crown of Thorns". The background characters were okay, but the language was too long and the sentences were not broken appropriately. The action description could be more incisive. In short, I also like this article. Although the articles I have seen so far (I couldn't help but praise them after reading three articles) are very short, only one or two chapters. But it doesn't feel as sloppy as other new articles, with strange logic and out-of-the-box thinking. I think the author's outline should be clear, and the plot should be advanced bit by bit like a wheel. This really tickled my fancy. Come on, come on, come on, I look forward to updating your articles. Reading your articles gives me the feeling of reading a novel. If I can finish one, I believe it will be a masterpiece. 💪
I don't know where the comment is better, so I'll put it here first, and delete it if it's inappropriate. Just think of it as nonsense. I haven't seen an article of this style in a long time. It's very well written. Many of the articles written by the author are more in line with his personal taste. The stories have a deep and melancholic meaning and are fascinating, but the writing style is a bit special and is relatively simple (not derogatory). It is not the same as hot articles and can be improved. The style is a more rigorous type. I personally feel that it is a bit "serious", but not "silky" enough (but I can't say that, I feel very weird. Personally, I like things that are niche, ORZ) Some storylines are very special and difficult to handle. A rather special idea