He was a sunny boy, raised under his older brother’s careful protection, until one act of kindness dragged him into a feud between wealthy families. Burdened by the glory and honor of a powerful family, and faced with his brother’s cold gaze where affection once lay, he even thought about ending his life...
But after hearing an astonishing secret from his father, the boy chose to be strong and fight for his future.
Four years later, when the boy had grown into a young man who could stand on his own, another man appeared, giving him and his brother a chance to relive the loving bond they once shared.
But happiness comes at a price...
Let me take a look. I would like to make a suggestion. Can you add a title to each chapter and write a summary of the content? I think it will be more attractive.
The title of the article is not good and the copywriting is not very attractive; there are too many dialogues in the text and it is not concise enough. But it's understandable if it's your first time writing an article, so go for it! Time will make you and your writing mature.