
I'm the One Who Fell First
先追到的人是我
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 394k Words
- Genre
- Baihe (GL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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116Chapters
6.1kFavorites
9.6Score
7.3kNutrient gifts
7.4kClicks per chapter
3.8kComments
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It's so beautiful, it's so beautiful, such a treasured article should be seen by more people! ! I like Fang Ranran the most! ! ! The pairing of Mr. Fang x Yu Xiaomin is so well done! ! ! Thanks to the author for creating Huanjiang, when "Huanjiang" is remembered, it is no longer just a noun, but a city, but the four of them, and thousands of stories and lives in the world of Huanjiang.
I really like this book. No one is perfect in the worldly sense. A strong pillar of support will also be afraid of getting tired. The little genius who seems to have everything is actually very lonely. The school bully with a hard fist is actually well-behaved and polite. A good student and a good girl are actually I have low self-esteem and I don't reject people. We are not perfect, but we are all working hard to live and shine. In my opinion, the most touching thing about these two pairs of CPs is that they are each other's charging stations. The kid who is twenty years apart is actually very reliable, and he calmly gave it to his grown-up former eldest sister. A child who can secretly be arrogant after becoming a child, a little genius who never shows weakness can safely act coquettishly and show weakness in front of a childish elder sister, a small school bully with extremely high martial arts skills who has learned to hold back his fists for his lover, and stands innocently at the door waiting for her, and a good student goddess who is shy and will not refuse anyone. I feel at ease and confidently tell the school bully my true thoughts. Everyone is growing up step by step. There is no perfection in this world, but when the destined lover appears, imperfection is not important at all. The embrace of the lover is the safe haven in this strange world.
I've finished watching it, it's so beautiful (little impression) It's great that cats and dogs can meet each other. I saw the parallel story about Guan Buyu thinking that there would be nothing wrong if the plane crashed on Huanjiang River, and Xiang Fang Ranran must have thought the same... If they had not met the mother and daughter, the only color in the lives of cats and dogs would be each other. It would be too lonely. Fortunately, they can meet Jiang Lingyu and Xiaomin. Two little animals who are actually afraid of loneliness have found their warm home. Thank you Teacher Coke, I enjoyed watching it~
The promised long review has been delayed until now. First, because of physical complaints. Second, I have been thinking about what to write and whether it would make sense to write after I finish it. I have passed the end of March to the beginning of April with hesitation. Finally, I decided to write something for this article, and I wanted to end it with a sense of ceremony. Compared with the descriptions of Qian Manqiu and Chi Ziqing in "She and the Sun and Me", "The One Who Caught Me First" involves more characters and has a more complex setting of the characters' backgrounds, which is undoubtedly an improvement. In the early stage, the images of the four protagonists Guan Buyu, Fang Ranran, Jiang Lingyu, and Yu Xiaomin were vivid on the paper, and they were closer to the images of small people in real life than female stars. I really love this kind of character description, because it is very easy for small characters to have a sense of substitution and to arouse empathy. Although I like to eat sweets, I prefer the sadistic points in articles. The chapters on Gypsophila and Snow are undoubtedly excellent chapters that I can pick up and read over and over again. It is these chapters that make me willing to believe that there is an inevitable point between Guan Buyu and Jiang Lingyu. The explosion of emotions and the collision of conflicts in these chapters made me excited and applauded. Even though it has been so long, I can still think of them. They are definitely among the top ones in my heart. Both pairs of CPs have their own excellent rivalry scenes. I believe that Fang Yu's Ming'an drunken kissing, speeding Harley, and holding hands back to his hometown are all things that many people will never forget. I want to believe that even in the fast-paced reading era, this novel will remain in the hearts of some people, including me. Next I want to say something else. It's harsh but it's exactly what I've always wanted to say. If I were to rate it, I would get 95 points in the early stages of this novel. But in the middle and later stages, especially after Fang Yu was slapped during the kiss, my perception dropped off a cliff. Excluding the author points, it would probably only get 75-80 points. In the early stage of the novel, the main subjects are Guan Buyu and Jiang Lingyu, interspersed with the interaction between Fang Ranran and Yu Xiaomin. The main perspective of the story focuses more on Guan Buyu and Fang Ranran, and Jiang Lingyu and Yu Xiaomin can be seen shining in their eyes. From the interaction and psychological description of the two pairs of CPs, the images of the four people are completely tenable. Although I have been struggling with why Fang Ranran fell in love with Yu Xiaomin. But in the middle and later stages, the description of the protagonist is more biased towards a single perspective, making it easier for readers to sympathize with the protagonist from the main perspective. I think this is why Jiang Lingyu was criticized near the end and there were a lot of comments in the comment area that BE is also good. The author and the reader view the same novel from different perspectives. If the author doesn't write down some of the protagonist's thoughts, it would be difficult for readers to understand them. It's not that you can't abuse, but you want to get a message - this abuse can promote the sublimation or integration of the protagonist's emotions. The novel "The Breakfast Shop" has a point that cannot be ignored - growth. I felt a strong sense of tearing after reading the entire novel. I thought the concept of growth here would be a slow and steady flow, but I didn't expect it to be so intense that it was almost tearing apart. I thought that Jiang Lingyu would learn to refuse with Guan Buyu, I thought that Guan Buyu would be willing to open up and learn to talk with Jiang Lingyu, I thought that Yu Xiaomin would choose to exhaust his energy and devote himself to the breakfast restaurant, only to murmur to the bright moon at night or feel the slightest regret. I was really angry and wanted to laugh when I saw what happened later. Jiang Lingyu still didn't learn to say no in college, Guan Buyu became more well-behaved, but the conflict remained sharp, and Yu Xiaomin went on a blind date. All the contradictions piled up, and a kiss and an illness became the fuse, blowing everything up in all directions. My understanding is that everyone needs a period of time to stay out of the situation, but it is really confusing to watch. Everyone has their thoughts buried deep in their hearts. Jiang Lingyu fell ill due to excessive psychological burden. Yu Xiaomin only took care of her but couldn't help her to express her inner feelings. What should I say? She is worthy of being a biological mother and daughter? They can both hold back. If I have to pay attention to the details, it will give me an even bigger headache. Regarding the supporting roles, the tool character attribute is really too strong. Every time I appear on the screen, I can only see the word "assist". I really like a series of characters such as Ye Wei, Ma Liang, Yu Lele, Yu Yuanyuan, Zhou Liu, etc. These supporting characters with obvious personality tags can be included in the group portrait, rather than ending hastily after assisting. I personally think this arrangement is a pity. It's been almost four hours since I've been revising and revising, and it's already past four in the morning, and I still have something to say. I have said so much not to discourage you, but to tell you that you can do better and that you are far beyond this level. You wrote this novel with your heart, and I also want to tell you all my thoughts without any confusion, instead of finishing it casually and turning around to read other people's novels. Coke Parfait, I am very grateful to you. Thank you for creating characters such as Guan Buyu, Fang Ranran, Jiang Lingyu, Yu Xiaomin, Ma Liang, Ye Wei, the Yu family brothers and sisters, Zhou Liu, etc. Thank you for creating excellent stories one after another. The story here has come to an end for now, see you in the next novel.
I really can't explain why Fang and Yu are a couple. Yu is 20 years older than Fang. He was married and had children. Forget it, but he still has the place of his dead husband in his heart. I really can't accept it. Maybe it's because I have mysophobia. I think Yu is so disgusting. If Fang falls in love again, even if she is single for the rest of her life, I will never be with her unless she completely forgets her ex-husband.
Two-way redemption, they have the courage to go through the world. Although the process is bumpy, they all belong in the end——
I like it so much. The teacher is really great.
Every article has been severely poked, a treasure
I really like Mr. Fang~! Smart and cute
Woo woo woo, it's late but it's time to be happy in the parallel world! Finished spreading flowers!