Snow Fox Guoguo

A man who changed his vest. . . . Sofa

So good

Very funny, (^_^) Not bad! Strong girls! Cute fruit! Smart Guoguo! I like it more and more But, Xian, when will you update the text?

So... So embarrassing~ He is actually gay~~ What a pity

Holy Spirit Fruit? What is it? Isn't it the fruit I found in the cave? Hmm... I guess it's just that thing, Isn't it better to segment it this way? (*^__^*) Hee hee...

Chong also received a long comment, and I was so excited! Is it time for a pen name? (*^__^*) Hee hee... I'm in a good mood, but I'm in a bad mood, and I still have to revise my essay! Now you can get more and more!

A brief review——"Snow Fox Fruit" First of all, what I want to say is that I haven't written a review for a while, and my hands have become disobedient. I hope Feixian doesn't mind my review. After all, everyone's opinions are different. From the narration of the article, I can see that Feixian is not very old, and his words are too playful and colloquial. Many modern and popular vocabulary are also incorporated into it. It is undeniable that time travel. To travel from modern times, some modern popular vocabulary is necessary. In this regard, Feixian's introduction is not very abrupt, and can only be said to be quite satisfactory. Regarding fantasy time travel, after going through various time travels such as Qing Dynasty time travel, Tang time time travel, overhead time travel, etc., It has become a popular fashion. In the article, the pig's feet are worn but not worn. She is destined to be a member of the mysterious family, but she This time she returned because her brother in her previous life accidentally killed the little snow fox of the fox tribe - she was used to possess the unlucky snow fox as compensation. I don't know if this was a blessing or an misfortune at the beginning, but I vaguely understood from Feixian There are hidden clues in this arrangement. I will wait and see whether this manslaughter is a conspiracy, in order to verify my intuition. The plot of the article is relatively novel, and it revolves around Guoguo's identity. What made her become the smartest fox in the fox tribe? Under Guoguo's intentional misdirection, Qimen became the main factor. We do not deny this fact. He, the Fox King We cannot speculate on their intentions, what kind of secrets are buried in the Holy Land of Snow Fox waiting for their arrival, and what countermeasures Qimen will have to achieve their mysterious goals... All of this, we are patiently waiting for Feixian The stroke of a pen. Novels are a modern popular product, and online novels are a broad group based on entertainment. We browse such novels mainly to relieve the mental pressure in real life and relieve the negative emotional impact, so the requirements are not very good. However, this article has too many dialogues. Two-thirds of a chapter is presented in dialogue. The description of characters and scenery has been seriously ignored. Feixian should pay attention to it. Appropriate situational narration is necessary to highlight the effect and fluency of dialogue. If the pure dialogue form is too fluid, some readers will feel bored. So appropriate narration is necessary and Feixian cannot be ignored. The title of the article points out the theme of the whole story. The protagonist of this story, Snow Fox Guoguo, is also described in the first person of the heroine. However, the flaw of the first person Chen's writing method is that there is a certain subjectivity in seeing the world through one's own eyes, and there is no objective side. The description of other characters and one's own subjective feelings The description of feelings will be too heavy, which makes the article tend to be in an autobiographical style and lose the original intention. However, if we grasp it well, the first person's narration can also create good objectivity and linkage. After all, the protagonist's sight should be able to lead everyone to read the entire article, so Feixian You should consider the words used in the heroine's narration to achieve this exactly, so that the article can be written in a regular and unique style. I have nothing to say at this point in my review. I have already said what I need to say, and there is nothing I shouldn't say. Haha, come on, Fei Xian! I hope your stories get better and better!

So pretty! ! Come on and update! !

The author's writing style is still a bit immature.

Then I'll sit on the bench