The writing is relatively general, and a lot of punctuation marks are missing.
I also suggest that you calm down and write slowly. You are probably a newbie, you have only written 9,000 words and you are already impetuous. Many authors only start reading after they have written 30,000 or even 50,000 words. Besides, your writing is not very good.
Although it doesn't sound good, it's the truth. If you don't like it, just ignore it.
Uh, by the way, this person is the emperor, uh, what's going on, the emperor is too anxious, he wants to be crowned a concubine so soon?
The male protagonist just left, and so did the little prince or emperor, leaving the female protagonist waiting alone. . .
Isn't this guy holding a chapter the hero???
Coming from BS, the beginning attracted me very much, and I kept reading.
Also, please give me your opinions.
. . . . The male protagonist... I don't know what kind of development he will have in the future...
Why is there no detailed description of the heroine's appearance? . OR Did I miss something???
The heroine's name... Is a bit cold
But the beginning looks pretty good~~! Come on and write
The writing is relatively general, and a lot of punctuation marks are missing. I also suggest that you calm down and write slowly. You are probably a newbie, you have only written 9,000 words and you are already impetuous. Many authors only start reading after they have written 30,000 or even 50,000 words. Besides, your writing is not very good. Although it doesn't sound good, it's the truth. If you don't like it, just ignore it.
Uh, by the way, this person is the emperor, uh, what's going on, the emperor is too anxious, he wants to be crowned a concubine so soon?
The male protagonist just left, and so did the little prince or emperor, leaving the female protagonist waiting alone. . .
Isn't this guy holding a chapter the hero???
Coming from BS, the beginning attracted me very much, and I kept reading.
Also, please give me your opinions.
. . . . The male protagonist... I don't know what kind of development he will have in the future... Why is there no detailed description of the heroine's appearance? . OR Did I miss something???
The heroine's name... Is a bit cold But the beginning looks pretty good~~! Come on and write