Qin Feng, a chef, transmigrates to another world after someone deliberately sets a fire. He has barely adjusted to a world where cultivators can punch mountains and kick the stars when he encounters the legendary beast tide.
After finally digging a pit to hide in and managing to escape, he climbs out and sees three filthy little kids sitting in a row nearby.
Qin Feng initially plans to leave them behind, but he can't resist their sparkling eyes, so he adopts them.
Traveling around with the kids, cooking delicious food and raising them along the way, Qin Feng increasingly feels that something is off:
The eldest gains strength just by eating. The second makes rapid progress, only to have his cultivation regress overnight. The third is so innocent that whenever he cries, it rains.
It dawns on him, and he slaps his thigh. Aren't these all protagonist templates from novels? So, did he raise the protagonists?
Theme: Even those who had no childhood can heal someone else's. Saving others is saving yourself.
Also, the plot is too protracted, and it feels like the protagonist is running around like a headless fly without any clues. The reader is left inexplicably confused. The subject matter is interesting, and the content is even better! I hope the author can think about it again
Publish some children's books, good news for children all over the world
The content of the copywriting does not match. It is about three children. The content of this plot is about two children.
The author's plot is too jumpy! There was a confrontation just now and the result was immediately introduced to the school! It makes readers very uncomfortable! It is recommended to at least provide a transitional connection!
"Class" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ Tired
"It's really delicious" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ really delicious
"Children" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ child
Damn, you need to check the post after you post it. It always bothers me because of the typos.
This looks very confusing to me and I can't understand it.
I'm quite interested in the setting, but when it's written like this, the character's characteristics seem a bit unclear.