I Pretend to Be a Big Shot in an Infinite Game

There were several copies agreed upon, and it felt so sudden.

Ah, I feel like it will be very interesting if I keep writing.

"None" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ five

It seems familiar but I still can't remember the plot. Sure enough, reading a novel like this for a long time and already forgetting the plot is the best way to solve the literary shortage.

It felt like it was unfinished and it ended very hastily, but it still managed to explain the cause and effect clearly. It's just a pity that such a large frame setting could have been filled with more interesting things. It can be seen that because of the game, Gong gained the ability to be as good as God, and he also plotted against God. In the end, he probably got what he wanted and lived happily with God. However, this last copy did not clearly explain the cause and effect, and the ending, including the endings of several teammates. In particular, the emotional line between the two has not been fully developed. It is too hasty to end it with only a hint of it. In particular, Shou was originally a god, and his career line should have been relatively broad, but now, as an ordinary person, he obviously cannot be called a boss. In the end, the world just won, which means that his career line has not developed much. In general, nothing developed. It started at the beginning and then ended hastily, barely giving a framework. Finishing this point in the end is more like moving the outline up, barely explaining that there is such a thing. The ending is that the protagonist and his wife live happily together, and then there is no more. It's a pity that it starts but ends at the end. In addition, this is an article with the main character as the main visual. The other descriptions are good, just the psychological description part. Sometimes there is no need to specifically mark it (for example, the inaudible part). Also, in addition to the inner words, some detailed psychological descriptions are also necessary, which is more suitable for third-person descriptions and satisfies the readers' desire to read the text visually. If possible, I still hope that the author can perfect this story again. It would be a pity to end it hastily with such a good outline.

Call Qin Zhu here, I thought it was called Qin Zhu

Why can't I find prepaid items?

Are you imprisoned here, eating mermaid flesh to live forever?

- - A bit outrageous

It's great. I still want to watch it. Can you write a sequel? (Crying