Although there are no messages...
But it's a very good novel
SO
Don't be angry
Here's a suggestion: 1. Add some environmental rendering and psychological description
2. Describe more details (your character image is still relatively thin)
3. I just want to say, could you please stop using so many ellipses?
4. Don't use too many dividing lines
Can it be changed to simplified Chinese? I think more people will see it this way
If a hunter has love, he will collect it~
Although there are no messages... But it's a very good novel SO Don't be angry
Here's a suggestion: 1. Add some environmental rendering and psychological description 2. Describe more details (your character image is still relatively thin) 3. I just want to say, could you please stop using so many ellipses? 4. Don't use too many dividing lines
Can it be changed to simplified Chinese? I think more people will see it this way
Alas── Still no message
Come on…